|Reviews for My Last Breath|
| Purple Evenleaf chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
*breaks down and sobs*Wonderful.
| Demon2TheWorld chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
OMG! I LOVE THIS its so sad but LUV IT!
| Tara-Faise chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
I really hate Will/Liz fics and i luv when people make Liz die but this is so sad! Poor Will! Are the word in italics a song or something? if they are email me the name and singer person
thanx! Great fic!
| Teazer9009 chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
you had to add the song! you had to add the song!
every time i hear that song, i cry for no good reason. this story gave me a reason. wonderful story. i think im going to read it again and cry some more.
| Siriusly Disturbed chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
Omg that was so sad...I love that song though, its such a great song. I like how Elizabeth returned for Will at then end. So sweet!
| The Black Pearl Sorceress chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Ahem. I really don't have any words to describe this one. It was increadibly depressing, but good.
| Kimmuryiel chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
O so sad! The 81 chp fanfic I was reading, "Soul of the Healer," was not as sad as this. You almost made me cry, but it takes alot to make me cry...
| mellowyellow36 chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
omygod I cried like a baby!and I never cry!Ive cry about 3 times in my life.2 included knifes...anyway you rock! ;~) ~Kay
| JessieRose chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
*sob* sad...but great! Really well written!
| elizabethk chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
That was so beautiful. They poem bits in italics were really sad. Did you write them?
| Flower Cynic chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
That was so sad. but beautifull at the same time.. it's terrific
| DarkAngel chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
That was beautiful.
| LordLanceahlot chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
aww... so... sad... *cries* good tho... sob*
| open-notebook chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
omg thats so good, it made me cry! i love how u worked the evanesence song into there... my favorite band! that's very good!
**worx in progress: Captain Obvious and Pirate Blood, r/r them plz!**