|Reviews for InuYasha: The Love That Transcends Time|
| Conelrad chapter 26 . 7/28/2004
Y'know, I was telling someone that I liked your original characters best? Well...I think this is one of my favorite chapters yet! I love flashbacks...and who cares if Sesshy's OOC? People don't have their personalities set in stone. I bet you'd change a lot in 50 years. Er...you do have a reason for his personality change though...right? The hyper Inu-chan was so cute! And I think this is going to be my new favorite conversation:
"Well, that's just cause you haven't done anything particularly wenchy lately."
"Wenchy isn't a word, InuYasha."
"Yes it is. I just said it."
Hahaha! Sounds like some conversations I've had. And InuYasha ticklish? Heh heh heh...
| TaintedDarkInuShemeeko chapter 26 . 7/26/2004
Wow this chapter was great, I loved it, especially the part where Kagome tickles InuYasha. The flash back of little InuYasha and young Sesshomaru was good to I can't wait to read more.
| TaintedDarkInuShemeeko chapter 18 . 7/26/2004
I just loved this Chapter then again I love Inu/Kag moments *wink*
| Tanwen Whitefire chapter 26 . 7/19/2004
kick ass chapter!its really awesome, and thats so cute with sessh and inu when they were little!aw!good, new chareacter, and inu and kag fluff, always good!please update soon!pretty please?ill love you forever...unless i already do...
| Kitten Kisses chapter 26 . 7/19/2004
Very cool. _ I haven't seen Ayame either, but it would be nice to. lol. Sounds good so far. I want to see the next chapter now. D
| Kitten Kisses chapter 25 . 7/19/2004
Good chapter again! :D Sorry i was late in reviewing. I haven't been on for a few weeks. ;; Anyway, this was great. D The only question i have is, is about kouga. How can he use the jewel shards if there aren't any anymore?
| gossa chapter 26 . 7/17/2004
good chapter,but what a way to finish it!I want to know what happened with Kagome and Inu Yasha (Fluuf EJEM XD) :)
| Storm-Maker chapter 26 . 7/16/2004
Since you said that you really didn't know much about Ayame, I'll give you the tip on the ice berg (well, as much as I know).
Ayame is a bubbly cheerful wolf yukai, who is imature, and VERY possesive of Kouga. She even threatens Kagome when she found out about her being 'his woman', she can throw quite a tantrum when she doesn't get her way, too. And, if I'm correct, her Grandfather is leader of the pack. (don't quote me on that)
As a history lesson (in case you didn't know) Ayame got lost one time when she was little (looked to be about 10) and Kouga found her (he looked to be about 13-15) he gave her a piggy back ride back to her tribe, and Ayame bragged about the training she was doing in the mountains (I think she was trying to become the next leader) asked him if he would marry her, and him being young, naive, and not thinking about it said yes-as soon as she had completed he rtraining, so when she had completed her training years later, she went in search of Kouga who of course didn't remember her and had no clue as to this promise.
There ya go, hopefully you found this of some use.
And, just to let you know, I really liked this chapter. It was interesting, and sentimental. And funny. I think it's one of my favorite chaps you've written.
Hope to read more soon!
| Tanwen Whitefire chapter 25 . 7/11/2004
awesome chapter. but its spelt messages. just a small note, im a picky speller! please update soon!please and thankyou!
| Conelrad chapter 25 . 7/11/2004
Ooh...enter Koga! Cool. I hope to add more comments...sorry I haven't yet.
| Storm-Maker chapter 25 . 7/10/2004
A small bit of critisism. When you were describing Kouga, you used a few words repeatedly, it was a bit weird, but no big. And a few small wording errors like 'I cought one of them trying to sneak out territory boss..." just for an example, and spelling names, Koga and Hikaku is popularely used, butRumiko uses Kouga and Hakkaku for the spelling. All very general mistakes that are farely common, so nothing big (I admit! I am guilty of them too! Sigh)
Otherwise, I really liked this chapter, you described it very well with out going over bored on the detail and portrayed Kouga perfectly. It's interesting seeing how you progress better with each chapter. I can't wait to read more, hopefully you update soon!
| vndbskjvndskjbndkjbndks chapter 25 . 7/9/2004
Thanks for explaining, I just thought maybe it said something different without the spaces that I wasn't quite catching. Great chapter! Can't wait for more Inuyasha and Kagome moments!
| gossa chapter 24 . 6/29/2004
good chapter,im waiting for Kagome and Inu Yahsa flluf P
| Rayame325 chapter 24 . 6/24/2004
Cool! My grandpa's nephew is coming up from Texas this Saturday! Poor Sango! Now she has to deal with two lechs! I can't wait to read more!
| Kitten Kisses chapter 24 . 6/24/2004
ROFLOL! Poor Sango! This chapter was awesome! The only mistake wast he line "unto a dragon" which someone else already pointed out. _;; So i won't bother with that. Lessee... i love to tell my favorite parts of the story (since i know that i like it when my readers do that for me ;) )... I really liked the ending, with the description of Sango. *snicker* Morgan is such a lech. lol! Kiriln and him go nicely together. Lol. It's almost like a Miroku/Sango relationship, those two are. *grin*
I also liked the fight-like scene with Sango, Kohaku, and Kirara. Even though it was short, it was well-written.
Kohaku's personality in this chapter was great. ) I really liked how you've written him. I like to see him as a shy, sweet younger boy who is a little wiser than his age suggests. _
Thanks for a wonderful story! I'll be back when you update, you better believe it! _ WooT! Thanks again!