Reviews for Last One Left Standing
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
*Snape was the first whisper of a cloud passing over the sun.* Loved that line. It fits their past (what we know of) perfectly.
Overall, I liked it. Insightful, without getting tiring. And I absolutely loved the last paragraph.
PS
You have a new friend at LJ...
Jeebus dirtface chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
Very detailed and thoughtful and a good deal of emotion. I think I'll check out your other stories if you have any.
smokingace chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
um, yes, i'm undoubtedly crying. i'm actually crying! gosh. but that last line from lupin gets to me too. we are much alike. you probably could make someone cry with your words alone, huh?
~chanel
you're on my favorites.
fruits candy chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
That was terribly deppresing but I still loved it, and you hinted at Remus loving Sirius, how sweet.
MaraudinglySerious chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
I love it! The ending was nifty!
Could you do me a favor and please read my fic? Thanks!
Zek Majiri chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Aw...
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aww...
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Very nice job handling something that could have turned into obnoxious goo. Keep on writing. you've got yerself a reader.
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Zek
Rebecca Lyn chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
That was really really good. Well planned and thoughtout. And I loved Remus's last words, very funny. _; Keep writing, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.