Reviews for Final Mission Status
NafX chapter 4 . 3/28/2004
Wo ... this is excellent!
I already reviewed at BI ... I think ...
But I just HAD to put a note on here too ...
This really is a fantastic story ...
Everything you write is excellent ...
Please come back with lots more REALLY quickly ... :)
DSakura chapter 4 . 3/28/2004
Great chapter as always! _ plz update soon. i'm dieing 2 know what happens next!
sakura chapter 4 . 3/28/2004
I rearly loved your story and i would rearly like to
know when your going to finish it.
From sakura blossom
IrrevocableVision chapter 4 . 3/27/2004
wow, first off, you give some very detailed and very graphic images. i love how you describe everything in perfect detail, but you dno't ramble on and on. that scene with heeo and relena was awesome and you made things even juicier when u had heero acting like his normal indifferent self later on, thus creating a curiousity on whether or not he means anything he does. (does he? guess i'll have to find out later on)
you guys are excellent writers and it completely worth the wait just for a well written chapter like this. i think as long as you promise to finish this story within five years, i'm hooked and i will definitely keep an eye out for it.
another thing i like his how well you relay relena's predicament and her emotional feelings, its gives the reader an in depth view of the turmoil caused by such inner chaos from heero.
you have a wonderfully unique plot and it really makes me wish that the anime could have been like this, even though i love the anime to death. the story really makes me eager to know what's going to happen next, and though i might have an idea, of course it is the author's choice to surprise the hell out of us all.
and ending the chapter like that was a brilliant stroke, it was perfect to end it there, simply perfect. you have me and probably hundreds of others leaping out of their seats and wishing that the next chapter would come out, or that they could read minds and know whats going to happen next.
now the real question at hand is...will relena give into her feelings and sleep with heero. or will she wonder if its even real and if heero actually decided he loved her and wanted to sleep with her, and decide not to sleep with him since it seems false. ah, the possibilities. i envy your muses...
DSakura chapter 3 . 3/27/2004
Super Saiyan 4 Vegito chapter 4 . 3/27/2004
I relly like your stroy Ihope you update because I hate waiting so placses update soon.
DSakura chapter 2 . 3/27/2004
GREAT chapter! u r a great author! *cries* i love this fanfic. its so cute!
CrimsonDragon chapter 4 . 3/27/2004
FINALLYY! YES! WOW i LOVED that chapter, you guys rock! im soo relieved to see this update cuz i was worried you might have stopped writing this fic ( possibly one of my worst nightmares). Wow this story is really heating up (_~). Go ahead and change the rating, i can stand to search "Rating:all" categories until i find the next update of this fic. The story is coming along great and i cant wait for the next chapter! You guys are awesome! Keep up the great writing and hopefully you can update thsi sooner! Goodluck!
DSakura chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
great chapter! i'm off 2 read the others! _
Faraday chapter 4 . 3/27/2004
oh dear oh dear oh ... MORE
HeeroYuy135 chapter 4 . 3/26/2004
You better jack up the rating big have to be *BEEP* me! You really have to! Damn...this is some good stuff you got going here. I can't for the next chapter! Keep this thing up!
MissBug chapter 4 . 3/26/2004
What? Why is everyone playing with Relena? It's her life that's being messed with by Cole and now her own brother and Heero are messing with her too! Doesn't she have any say in this? Or is she just going to follow along blindly? The girl needs to take a stand! Agh! Write more soon! I'm dying to know what is going to happen!
Rav chapter 4 . 3/26/2004
Excellent! A x 100,0,0,0
hehe as you can tell I really like this fic. The cliffhangers are great, kept me wanting more of this wonderful ficcy. please continue )
WindCloud chapter 4 . 3/26/2004
hey this story is getting better by ther moment. HUrry up and update, and stop making heero so umcaring and umemotional..that was so mean of heero to say..about the off camera thing. Anyways great story and UPDATE..looking forward to future chapters
Hououza chapter 4 . 3/26/2004
That was absolutely excellent!
Liked the duality of Heero's behaviour between the on and off camera moments. The only question remains is which one is real...
The last part...I have to admit I started to expect it from the earlier part of the chapter. In the end it was always going to come down to that. Even more the fact that Heero was baffled is even more perfect. In this perhaps more than anything else we may well have a deeper insight into how he truely feels.
Oh and with regards to the rating change don't worry. Your on my alerts list so it should tell me when the next one arrives.
Till then good luck & best wishes,
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