Reviews for Red Walls
CodyRhodesFan chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
:3 :3 :3 AWWW!

An angst fic with Shannon Moore. 3

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Aww...the pain...

You're only motivation...:(

The mirror in front of me reflects an image that looks so forgein...so unappealing...AWWWWWWWWW! :(

My eyes are dull and the colour of dying leaves or pine needles. -that is an awesome sentence.

Bruises? Scars? Cuts? OH YAY! :D

...aww...the backyard thing is adorable!

Poor Shanny...

Back where you ud to beat me and call me nasty names. :3 OHHH...IS THERE GONNA BE ANY RAPEAGE? XD.

Awww! He felt sorry. XD.

Then he hit him. -_- God. Such a cycle.

On his blood like a sick type of bath. I AM USING THAT IN A FIC. XD. I WILL. 3

Blades and ties and gags and bonds are an ADDICTION? Holy...O_O

Aww...

Shannon wanted to be like Matty?

THAT IS SO SAD. -_-

...and I'm happy again.

Wonderful job on the fic, dahlie. 3

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X Sam.
takers dark lover chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Very sad I wanted to cry! Good story.
I Love-Hate him chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
*sniff* The last part of this, the last line, it hit right on spot, I cried when I read this. I can really relate...

*sniff* Poor Shannon! *sobs* Matt's evil for hurting him like that! EVIL!

But, anyway, amazing story, really deep and heartbreaking.
Jeff's favourite skittle chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Oh...
You write Matt best as the dark, sadistic type.
Poor Shannon, hooked on Matt's torturous ways...I believe that your brother would be proud, the title itself is very original and you've woven it into the story perfectly.
Newly invented description's helped tell Shannon's story...the shorter lines really had me, I thought the start was the beggining of a excellent descriptions kept the story flowing...how sad, such a meaningless end, unfeeling final words. Keep up the good work, this goes to show that you adapt to diffrent styles of writing, and hopefully some more darker stories to weave into your book of tales in future. Another excellent story, and the legacy continues...
~Moore-On~
~Jeff's Favourite Skittle~
FuZzZzy Bunny chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
Totally brilliant!
I almost cryed-i am a total moore-on, and I love shannon, i like your work
Keep it up!
~Makadamia Nutfish~
xtremediva chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Good story. Very powerful and sad. Poor Shannon.
Cat Lea Takersdarkone chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Oh my poor little shannon. But another great story from you. Love your writing so much. But hate Matt.