|Reviews for Promise of the BlueEyes White Dragon|
| Aislynn Goldleaf chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
I think you've really captured Seto here.
My only suggestion, I think you mean "calm under the surface" not "clam under the surface."
I like the descriptions, especially the 11th section that starts off with: "He stared down at the card again," Now, if I could only draw better...