Reviews for Disappear |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Harry, he is reaaallly going through it. Can someone please just give him a damn pensive already? No one had checked his memories or given him veritserum and I’m shook about it. Can’t wait to see the adults try to make up for this catastrophe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is the point of this? So far, you've tortured Harry non stop since the start of the fic. I sincerely hope you have some miraculous easy of fixing this because i can't see it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I hope the last chapter will one day be added. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Review : Author's fucked in the head, harry is a retard and a crybaby in this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() harry is a fucking pussy wtf? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 3 and Harry is an idiot and a pussy, is there a reason behind this? The chance to strangle him look really apealling right now. I don't remember him being this stupid or maybe I was wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is fantastic! i really like this story. i’ve seen fics with similar premises before but this is by far my favorite of them. i really hope you continue it eventually! and i hope you and yours are well :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has to be one of the most stupid ff I have ever read. This Harry is dumber than a troll. All he does is scream instead of actually staying anything that might help him. With magic anything is possible, he has used time turned in his 3rd year yet he is instead of tell truth of his life by taking veritesum he instead choose to remain silent like seriously when everyone days him he is a death eater that means something is wrong yet he is behaving stupidly instead of taking it. Not just that if you know no one believes in wizarding you will hide in a muggle world not to go the place. It truly a dumb ff which has Harry Potter who is dumber than a troll. |
![]() ![]() ahh one chapter left and the story hasnt been updated in so long |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am leaving after the first chapter. Just one bit of fair advice. Don't make the protagonist so pathetic in the first chapter. He starts crying, sobbing and sk much and has no clue what is going on. |
![]() ![]() I know this is just the first chapter but ... This Harry seems Particularly Stupid ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't leave us hanging like this! Please pretty please with a charming Charms essay on top write the next chapter! I need this finished, else I go insane! I need Harry to get to the Veil, else I shan't survive! XO X( X[ Hopefully this review motivates you to finish this masterpiece! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I read the summary and get really excited. I thought if was a brilliant idea. But this whole saying the wrong thing at every turn is just annoying and I can't properly enjoy this story like I'd hope. Especially when a different Voldemort than his own influences him more than the real one does. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so crazy! I know you’re probably not even active anymore, but if you are, please update or let us know it’s done, done please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this is so good! it's been a while but i really hope you finish this :) |