excellent story! very well written. had me hooked from the first chapter and I spent all day reading

Really loved this. Great plot and really well written. Perfect Severus too - horrible snarky bastard but just like Hermione we find him irresistible!

Excellent!

This is probably the 5th or 6th time I've read this story. One of my favorite Sevmiones . I wish my own story's were written so well.

Where can I find the racier Verisons of this story ! I'm intrigued ! Great job so far

That was quite the plot twist. Completely unexpected use of Hermione's magic (and I'll say no more for the sake of spoilers). Very well plotted. Also one of the best fictional prophecies I've ever read. When I consider the difficulties most authors seem to have, I start to feel one almost has to consider Prophecy as a foreign language. Rowling is better at it than most of her fanfiction followers, until today I would have said better than any, but the way this whole prophecy suddenly made sense only at the point of its fulfillment would have made the Delphic Oracle proud.

I absolutely loved your story please tell me that you wrote a sequel if not you definitely should also I was unable to access or find the Unrated version of the story with the more mature scenes could you please PM me a link to it because when I tried to look up what you would put in the bottom of the story of the author's note it never went through

Even though I have not read any of the books and have only seen short scenes from the some of the movies recently, I very much enjoy the Severus and Hermione pairing. Probably because I am a Allan Rickman fan. I love your story and the twists and turns you created. Thank you these many years later for the time you gave to develop these characters!

Betrayal bring hope, loyalty bring despair

Miss Weasley has a great deal more sense than these other two… and as the majority of her family is in the Order she will no doubt be involved in discussions concerning the prophecy

And then BAM! Ginny betray them. *suspicion suspicion*
*my mind is being wild*

Awesome! No more holding back, love it!

Is there a racier version of this somewhere? This is such a great story, and I liked it so much that this is my second time reading. However, this time it feels like all the good bits have been edited out. Perhaps in reaction to some sanctimonious reviewer or perhaps it's just staleness caused by reading twice? I confess I don't read lengthy author's notes, sorry, but I find anything over a one or two lines to be tedious. Why must authors use the notes to answer their fans instead of messaging them directly? Boring for the rest of us. Anyways, I'll look back through the juicier chapters for a clue.

I like the balance you acheive in your sex scenes. You give us just enough details to engage us, but always leave us wanting more.

What a wonderful, thoughtful and well-written story! I enjoyed reading this immensely, and I loved the slightly different picture you painted of Snape. It took me a few chapters, but then, I must admit, I came to like him better like this: dark, sexy and confident rather than insecure and incapable of human interaction. Slightly dark Hermione was great, too.
You did a really good job of bringing the general storyline to a logical and nicely done ending, with a surprisingly good version of the final battle. In fact, I liked it much better than the original. Kudos to the prophecy and how you worked that out! I would never have guessed... it was brilliantly done. And last not least, you had some really intriguing new ideas in this story - like Rudolphus, Ollivander, Viktor and the Call. Really, a very thorough, good job you did with this story!

Your links for the full lemons aren't showing up because ffnet eats hyperlinks. You have to put spaces between the dots :)

Forcing very young adults to marry is the same thing as government-sanctioned rape. What exactly do married couples do, right? Sex. Forcing very young adults to fuck under the guise of forced marriage is somehow supposed to be romantic?