Reviews for Smooch
wff-writer chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
f.. fa.. face paint? what the hell? I am out of breath.. that was too funny!
cherry fantasy chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Kai : I did knew it.

Me : Sure...

Kai : (glares)

Me : Ek ! (hides under a table)

Tyson : You scared her.

Kai : So ?

Tyson : It's not nice. Apologize !

Kai : No.

Tyson : Then no more kisses.

Kai : 0.o (runs to cherry fantasy) I'm sorry !

Me : (roll my eyes and sigh) I'm sure that came from the bottom of your heart...

Kai and Tyson : (kisses)

Me : Oh my...

Your fic was short but very funny ! Keep it up ! -
darkangelintheshadows chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
hahaha joker!
Rav Joel Madden chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
i thught that was fricken hillariose(cant spell that damn word)
squizz chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
u knew that didn't u Kai, that was a mix between funny and cute !
Kiina chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Carapheonix chapter 1 . 6/7/2004

Funny I like it.

Could you do a BryanRei one?

Not one like this but, a Bryan Rei fic?
B.U.G.I.M.S chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
XD The sad thing is, I say that exact same line all the time
LOVErayLOVE chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
ok quite amusing i sound like a right prat wen i rite that but its true u shud ave made kai blush a bit mre and protest!
anywho im a fan of tyka but im an even bigger fan of RAY! *swoon* u cud if u really wanted to make me really happy u cud do a alex and ray type thing! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
Keeper of Soul chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! This was hilarious man! I loved it! 'Tis very kawaii!
Favourite Quote: "No! I'm not gonna let you take off my face-paint, Tyson!"
Hehehehehehe... SO CUTE! Short that it was, I still thought this was great! *grin*
Little Leila chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
That was nice. But I dont think its really face-paint. Because I saw it often enough that Kai goes even to bed like this. Isnt he afraid to loose his cool locks while sleeping? o_O? But sweet and funny to read really, keep up the good work.
SilverNcold1 chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
XD, that was funny and cute...though it was really short..oh well..I liked it. Great job!
Ms Hobgoblin chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
Laughs out loud !
Very fun and cute ficcy !
well put together. If that was boredom, I wondor what you can write when you put your mind to it!
Hob x
SilveryKitsune chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
Silver: What the-
Tyson: That was really odd...
Kai: I knew that, really!
Silver: - - sure you did Kai...
Tyson: I just wanted to kiss you, that's all...
Kai: ::kisses him again::
Silver: I'm surrounded with idiots ; Anyway! This is very short...and it's really weird...but it seems okay to me ; Keep writing...just try really hard not to write when you're awake after you sleep ; or when you're extremely bored...just because it might have reviewers say bad things about it sometimes ; Just for you to know, i'm not flaming you..i can't and i will only if one person is very selfish and have everyone go after her in fanfics...those i will have to flame...
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