wonderful chapter! It ashamed that no more was written.

I don't suppose you have any interest in continuing this? It's really interesting, and I'd like to see more.

hm i like where this story is heading to very good writing there, i rly got a general feel of suspension and mysteriousness there...the way suzaku and muraki talked was most intriguing and very IC ( on muraki's part at least, i havent heard suzaku talk b4 _)
ganbatte! i look forward to more.

That was an excellent first chapter. I'm intrigued and I definately want to know what's going on.
Your style is engaging and your format, spelling and grammar are all in wonderful order. It reads like watching a movie. I can see exactly what's going on, from posturing and attitude to the personality of the characters.
I'm extremely critical of the things I read and you have gone far beyond impressing me. I'm adding you to my favorites list. Please let me read more of your tale soon.

It's always great to see a new Yami no Matsuei fic from you! This looks very interesting. Please keep up the good work!

Whats Suzaku up to! Damn I'm so curious, whats gonna happen to Tsuzuki and Hisoka? Continue!

And there was great joy in Chijou at the posting of a new incandescens Yami fic.
As Muraki would say, intriguing. Can't wait to see more.