Reviews for Don't Let Go
JustCallMeMarly chapter 19 . 1/28/2004
oh... me likey... Nice job! I like the cliffhanger as to what's happening to dear, sweet Elizabeth. I also liked the incorporation or Murtogg and Mullroy. I love those goons! :) Jack, going back for Evans, hm. I still say you should stand him up and let everyone have a whack at 'im. Oh, oh, oh *raises hand* Me first! I'll wallup him good, I promise! Anyways, only a couple of more chappies, hm? Well, that's sad. But I always like sequels! Can't wait to see how you're going to leave this one, then! Of course, happy Jack-Ana kissage is ALWAYS agreeable! :P Nice update, can't wait for the next one! Ta for now! - SpecialEddie
Jamei chapter 19 . 1/28/2004
YOU ARE THE BEST J/A FIC WRITER EVER! Keep up the good work and please write a sequel!
J.L. Dexter chapter 19 . 1/27/2004
*mocks shock* Have I ever given you reason to think I never understood/liked your story? The utter silence was in awe- complete and total undulated awe. *grins*
I've made a spectacle of myself, for sure, but this story is just so... so... brilliant. (for lack of better words.) and ocne again, in the presence of this wonderfully scripted chapter, I am in utter and complete shocked silence. *munches on popcorn idly* ... Encore!
P.S. Thanks (I'm sure you know for what _~)
dreamofdesire chapter 18 . 1/27/2004
I love this chapter! It rocks! I can't wait to read the next one.
hollaiuar chapter 18 . 1/27/2004
Gah! No! Don't be uh leavin' it at uh pause, mate! Ye can't just leave me wonderin' what 'appens next! Ye gotta update soon, savvy?
Keep up the Fab-u-lous work! _ And hope to read more really soon!
JustCallMeMarly chapter 18 . 1/27/2004
Another update... how exciting! I'm glad that Jack found Ana! Too bad Charles got in his last parting shots to Ana's person and that she's injured... but Jack to save the day is all worth it, I guess. I'm glad that both Norrington and Will had his back and told him to get Ana out. Now, we'll see how a still weakened Jack handles an unconscious Ana. I can't wait for the next update... :)
J.L. Dexter chapter 18 . 1/26/2004
*stares in complete and utter bafflement, the silence in the background deafening* ...
Mme Hausfrau chapter 18 . 1/26/2004
This is a great story! Hang in there Ana!
highlitergrl chapter 18 . 1/26/2004
shes ok, right? right? RIGHT? write more soon!
Missy Mouse chapter 17 . 1/26/2004
*clutches security blankie still tighter. begins to suck thumb. Eyes go wide with anxiounous at the thought of next chappie*
JustCallMeMarly chapter 17 . 1/26/2004
You have me fair to hooked, darling... This is definately becoming a great intrigue. Will they get to her before something dastardly happens? Who will be the one to get to her? Will it be Jack? I can't wait to find out all of the answers to these questions! Did Jack perhaps see the manhandling of his Ana? He can certainly take out his anger on Evans. I, for one of many, won't care. What an ss the man is. I eagerly await the end of the scoundrel. I applaud another splendid update! -SpecialEd
J.L. Dexter chapter 17 . 1/25/2004
I'm so glad you changed the guard for this; forgive me for not signing in tonight, it's extremely late -_-
Another fabulous job, the plot quickly coming to a climax in it's theaterical debut, things are falling into place more quickly while yet everything in the background begins to heat up. While the chapter was shorter than we liked, you did an outstanding job with everything; grammar, character placement and reader suspense.
I can't wait for another chapter even if it's the mark of this story coming to a near future end. Happy writing!
JustCallMeMarly chapter 16 . 1/24/2004
I liked it, so I don't know what you're saying about coming up with something original. I'm glad the coin is leading Jack to Ana... and I'm glad that Eve was allowed to come along. AND I'm glad Ana gave another try at Evans' groin. He deserves it and so much more. I think she should get another shot it before this is all over... and Jack should have a shot too... Heck, line up all the good guys so they can have a shot at Evans... Charles too. What a bastard! I can't wait to see what you've got planned next! Keep it up! -SpecialEddie
Missy Mouse chapter 16 . 1/24/2004
*sobs histerically, cheers happily, and worries dreadfully all at same time*
Missy Mouse chapter 15 . 1/23/2004
*pulls security blankie closer*
O_o
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