|Reviews for How he became to be|
| garnetamethst chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
I normaly love fics about Hwoarang, but I had trouble reading yours. I don't want to seem mean, but you need to work on your writing skills. I had to add missing words and letters in my head as I read just to make sence of it. But don't worry, once you fix it it will run smoothly. Don't give up.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Eh. A little too fast paced, a bit dull in a way, nothing innovative/interesting. Build more suspense with more description and imagery.
Look at this as constructive criticism.
| Nightwalkerin chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
Hey, a good story! Go on, I'm waiting...
| Tuk chapter 2 . 3/16/2004
Good story but poorly written. Many verb tenses are incorrect and make it hard to read. The fights are descriptive enough. Just work on the grammar man.
| Ran Nuankai chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
Oh My Gosh, that wuz so GREAT!
PLEAZ continue, I'm Hooked! _
LUV & PEACE ALWAYZ!
~ Rain _~