Reviews for How he became to be
garnetamethst chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
I normaly love fics about Hwoarang, but I had trouble reading yours. I don't want to seem mean, but you need to work on your writing skills. I had to add missing words and letters in my head as I read just to make sence of it. But don't worry, once you fix it it will run smoothly. Don't give up.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Eh. A little too fast paced, a bit dull in a way, nothing innovative/interesting. Build more suspense with more description and imagery.
Look at this as constructive criticism.
Nightwalkerin chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
Hey, a good story! Go on, I'm waiting...
Tuk chapter 2 . 3/16/2004
Good story but poorly written. Many verb tenses are incorrect and make it hard to read. The fights are descriptive enough. Just work on the grammar man.
Ran Nuankai chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
Oh My Gosh, that wuz so GREAT!
PLEAZ continue, I'm Hooked! _
~ Rain _~