|Reviews for Soon|
| Icepen chapter 25 . 12/29/2012
awww come on... i love tis story it's super cool... but i'll wait.
| Icepen chapter 23 . 12/29/2012
they spuld totalyhave a prank war. That would be so cool...*stares out the window dreamily*
| Icepen chapter 13 . 12/29/2012
oooh when does harrfind out? this is getting super exciting
| Icepen chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
ohhh this is so cool... never read anything like it... keep it up
| Amelia Johnson chapter 10 . 9/30/2012
Hey just a quick tip but instead of 'shook their heads,yes' use nodded or nod and try keeping to one tense because you keep switching to past tense, which it should be, to present tense. Other than that you have a great plot but these little mistakes put me off reading your story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
| A Big Fan of Most Things chapter 26 . 7/8/2012
First, I would like to thank you for letting many know in the review section that you have, willingly, broken rules on the site. What you have submitted is not allowed on the site based on their rules. It is breaking the rules, which is quoted below:
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| MomoMouat97 chapter 3 . 2/7/2012
i like this!
| Dementedjen chapter 4 . 1/23/2011
Things like "(A/N: scotch with ice.)" are unnecessary and distracting. If someone doesn't know what it is, they can look it up. You only use Author's Notes when it's explaining something unique to your story. Something that can't be looked up.
| Jim Red Hawk chapter 22 . 12/6/2010
"The inside of this mansion was the first thing Harry, Ron and Hermione saw when they flooed in."
Duh! I have never heard of anyone flooing to the outside! :}
| babysayitisn'tso chapter 7 . 12/6/2010
never said it was located in Scotland. I said england's hellmouth was closed and it was called Stonehenge...in no point it was said to be located in Scotland. Stonehenge is located in England!
| Jim Red Hawk chapter 7 . 12/6/2010
"Thank god the England hellmouth is close. Some of you may know it, Stonehenge."
Stonehenge is located in England, NOT Scotland!
| Inflamora Notoris chapter 26 . 2/16/2010
wicked. But why 'wink murder' for halloween?
| bananacupcakes chapter 26 . 10/19/2009
Please continue :)
| panther73110 chapter 26 . 9/23/2009
I was just wondering will you put a note up if someone takes this story?