|Reviews for Living on the outside|
| Jesse bourgeois chapter 16 . 2/5/2010
i think u need to right a sequel tht story was awsome
| Kiyarae chapter 16 . 6/26/2005
aww hey waitaminute! what happened to Beastboy's whole thingamabob he was supposed to tell raven? ah, well...it was a good story anyway, and I love swift! even if you could kinda tell they were supposed to be sisters instead of cousins. although, i guess they're sister-y cousins or cousin-y sisters, so it all works out in the end. great story!
| Kenji Star chapter 16 . 5/15/2005
That was such a great story, loved it!
But maybe I missed it or something, but did Beast Boy ever tell Raven what was wrong with him or what was bothering him...whatever it was?
Well, besides that...great story.
| Ace of Aces 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
| Dark Soul chapter 16 . 3/18/2005
I loved both parts of this story... Your writing style is incredible and you really seemed to bring Raven and Beastboy to life. I would really like to see this story line continue on... maybe even as older versions of them selves. Please keep writing!
| me.again chapter 16 . 2/25/2005
write a sequal ur stories r awsome and i love reading them...my mom yells at me for satying on to long and usually im reading urs. LOL well see ya soon. From the Demonoffire217
| quillmaster14 chapter 16 . 12/21/2004
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
You must write a sequel, I swear you should like kick the offical writers of the Teen Titans out of there and take over!
| Aethaena chapter 16 . 9/24/2004
OMG- YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUAL! Preferably ASAP I need to read more!
| dj chapter 16 . 8/6/2004
great GREAT G-R-E-A-T story! I loved it. pleez write a sequel!PLEEZ!
| soraoathkeeper chapter 16 . 7/2/2004
Great story, but...what about Beast Boy? And his secret? I thought that you were going to reveal it! Or did you already, and I wasn't reading it right? O.o...well, if you can, can you please write a sequel? Dankushan!
"The only time a goodbye is painful is when you know you'll never say hello again."
| Puchiko chapter 16 . 6/29/2004
Say,ah know Cy's girl. Mah charater,Havin. She Raven's cousin.
| Piezo chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Please, make a sequel!
| Coco Cow chapter 16 . 6/18/2004
Aw..I feel so bad for Cyborg :(
Yes, PLEASE make a sequel! Pretty Please!
...geez, I'm hyper today.
-_ Coco Cow (MOO!..yup, definitately hyper)
| Lady Mazikeen chapter 16 . 6/17/2004
i want a sequal. that story was amazing. i never expected her to leave cyborg so that was a real shocker, but somehow it made the story work. great job.
| A purple otter chapter 16 . 6/17/2004
I haven't seen this for a long time but I'm back and we all want you to make another sequel right?
I'm going to make an account here.
It will be A purple otter once I get it set up.
Weel I am happy that you finished it! I like it!
A monstrous chocolate cake for you to munch on!