|Reviews for Viator Et Iudicium|
| Tinuel chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
I'd expect many more reviews for this piece..
It was wonderful _
You have a /beautiful/ style of writing. Descibing both emotions and actions, you leave nothing untouched.
I loved how you wrapped the lives of some of the GF's together :) It was a wonderful concept! Truely.
The entire thought of this was very creative, and revealed very beuatifully.
It was slightly tragic and romantic all at once.
"My fire will melt your ice eventually" - simply love it ;) A perfect way to describe this pairing.
The overall idea of Ifrit and Shiva is fun .
Fire and Ice - simply dont belong. But you turned it into a more static like relationship xD
| The Fibonaccist chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
Why arn't there more reviews about this? This was AWESOME. I love when real-time mythology/legends/pantheons are incorporated into a game story- I guess that's why I love FF summons so much. You did a great job!
| Xx.Toxic.Little.KisseS.xX chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
wow, that was such a great story!
Thankyou so much for writing this! Eep.
Loved it so much,
Jade Andrea Fawkes
| Ashbear chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Really, I had never paid much attention to challenges before, but after thinking about, it really is fascinating how one can come up with so many perspectives on given criteria. The idea of having their pasts linked was truly inspired, and a logical explanation seeing that Ifrit knew of Shiva from the Fire Cave. I love your entire style of writing, and all the thought that went into this piece…and all your pieces for that matter. No, Shiva wasn’t evil for long, but really that fits well within the Final Fantasy realm. Also, I liked how you had it taking place over a time period, and not just in one day…how you brought the game storyline into show that correlation. From Squall first going to the Fire Cave, to when he had feelings for Rinoa… you did without specifics, and that was what stood out. Absolutely wonderful. You have a wonderful talent… Final Fantasy or original… Please, always keep writing,
| Neoneoneobanana chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
It was brilliant.
| Kosinuyasha chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
I liked it alot! Personally not as long as I had hoped, but a very good read!As far as constructive criticism...Im not good at that.
| FantasyTrepie14 chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Incredibly awesome. The entire thing was beautiful, from beginning to end. The human nature and history you gave Shiva, as well as the other GF's was completely breathtaking... Shiva has always, always been my favorite
| Rinoica chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
Beautiful… You came up with a believable and interesting reason for Shiva to be evil. I like the way you characterised GFs and the idea that they’re spirits of dead. Whatever you write is simply great, always interesting, colourful, and convincing. I always look forward to read something you wrote.
| The Angel of the Lion chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
Wow, that was wonderful, I loved it.