Reviews for Looking through glass
buttonbit chapter 4 . 5/26/2008
Good- maybe there could be more marauder stuff and Sirius?
whitetiger72 chapter 4 . 7/23/2007
wow really great. please upsate soon.

Silver Hana chapter 4 . 7/27/2006
very interesting. i look forward to reading more! a few spelling errors. but who am i to say that. i suck at grammer! anyway... keep writing cus its good. you have me totaly wondering what haunts her. i just thought it was gonna be the same old parents dead thing. and even if it is that it already has a nice twist on it! i really wanna know about the cliff! anway... write soon!
imai16 chapter 4 . 4/23/2006
I really really love this story! The way it's written, and the whole story... You are talented in describing feelings! Please update...:D
DDwelling chapter 4 . 2/7/2006
not really an equation...more like,


and now i will fill in the missing numbers

reading story, story rated, 1-10best8

leaving a review, 1yes, 0no1

author's happiness, 1-108

update faster1


which means you will update in 9 days...

Saija-chan chapter 4 . 10/23/2005
Oh, I read your story so far, and I absolutely like it! You need to send more chapters...
mrsjesspotter chapter 4 . 4/25/2005

up-date soon, i love it!

Emerald Eyes of Lily chapter 4 . 11/24/2004
Please update this story! It has very good grammar and i recommend this for a good read! Try and update as soon as you can!
ccsluver4life chapter 4 . 10/12/2004
so good! plz update soon dnt keep us hangin! keep up the good work!
sUzane chapter 4 . 10/3/2004

nice fanfic...i really love james-lily stories.

hope you update soo. i can't wait to find out what happens next..

keep up the good work..

Dilatory chapter 4 . 9/29/2004
this is really good - the writing quality is excellent. Lily really comes across as being very cool, very detached, influencing the mood of the entire piece. The only bit i didnt like was - *winces* class valadectorian. or however you spell it. what is that? I'm guessing its some sort of american thing, but it really feels wrong, especially as you havent made any other obviouse americanisms. what does a valedectorian thingy actually do? Thers almost certainly a british equivilant... apart from that, its an excellent piece of writing - just update faster! am dieing here!
OliviaJoules chapter 4 . 9/15/2004
Ah...good story. Terrible cliffhanger though...

Don't tell me that her fear is of falling down a cliff? Because that would just be as trite as hell...

Update soon.
wwwwwww chapter 4 . 9/4/2004
please update soon !
Just a reader chapter 4 . 8/19/2004
Hey...I really like your story so far. Keep updating and adding more chapters. I can't wait for the plot to pick up. You're doing a good job of keeping us all wondering about what in the world happened to Lily. Lily is one of my favorite characters, probably because her character has a bit of mystery about her and Rowling hasn't formed her completely so I can mess around with her personality traits in my head. Keep on writing!
anno chapter 4 . 8/18/2004
love your story. Please update soon and keep up the good work
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