|Reviews for Bittersweet|
| Reibunriinta chapter 4 . 4/9
This was such a cute story! _
| Reibunriinta chapter 3 . 4/9
Lulu is awesome! Seriously I just love her character so much! This story seems really good! I love it so far;
| Reibunriinta chapter 2 . 4/9
Love it! _ you know the funny thing is is that I was like 2-3 when you wrote this! That's just so weird isn't it!?
| Reibunriinta chapter 1 . 4/9
Oooh so sad! I've never heard this song before...maybe I'll look it up. _ and seriously Paralai is the the best couple/ship name ever! It just sounds so perfect! It just suits them so well! Lol I am so obsessed on Paralai right now. Lol is it weird that when I am talking about a couple instead of saying both their names I day there could name? Instead of "Ph poor Paine and Baralai can't catch a break!" I'll be like "Poor Paralai can't catch a break." Lol I talk to much don't I? Lol I love this so far. _
| Songsa chapter 2 . 8/11/2008
Aww, this story was really sweet. I loved how you took lines from the actual game and put them into context for your story. It made it all the more powerful. It was also very well-written. I liked how you actually took the time to indent your paragraphs. Unfortunately, that's something I'm too lazy to do when I write fics.
I also have to comment on one line in your story. It was said by Gippal in, I believe, chapter three.
“Even I felt somethin’ for her back then. She’s not exactly an unattractive woman.”
That line brought a great big grin to my face. While I like Paine/Baralai, I have also started growing a bit of a soft spot for Gippal/Paine. After reading some very well-written essays, I have been convinced that they'd make a good couple. Unfortunately, Gippal/Paine fics are few and far between, so I am quite deprived. That little line was kind of a fix for me. D
Anyway, thank you for writing this wonderful fic and temporarily curing my boredom.
| Cbabeh chapter 4 . 11/15/2007
DOPE! i loved it..so now that your back can we geta sequel? cmon man i know you want too lol but neways back to the story theres nothing you coulda done better, you portrayed both of them beautifully. thanks for writing it lol
| Kurissyma san Tybalt chapter 4 . 4/18/2007
'The Rose' is so pretty :P I love your fic, btw :P
| SCK chapter 4 . 1/23/2007
Awesome story I love it Paine x Baralai forever
| Paine jnr chapter 4 . 3/23/2006
Apparently you've got The Assassins (my story) on alert so I thought I'd pop down and pay a visit...
It was very good! I really lked it, how you explored both of their feelings and then brought them together. Just a technical glitch though - you've got something printed twice!
Anyhow, very well done. A satisfying first story.
| AiriKatsu chapter 4 . 2/12/2005
*claps hands* yay-ness!
| mika888 chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
Bittersweet indeed...wonderful story! :) Hope you write lots more BxP in the future
| blackz chapter 4 . 12/17/2004
I just love this story...I'm an absolute fan of paine/baralai pairings! And it's so hard to find their fics...! But this is great...so sweet and fluffy!
Write more baralai/paine fics! LOL!
| Unknown chapter 4 . 12/5/2004
Hey, that was great. I’m a writer myself and I really enjoyed it! I’m a romantic type too. Please keep writing more, and I’ll keep reviewing. Write lots more!
| Shinimegami chapter 4 . 7/11/2004
O.o Uh... So...CUTE! :-P I've got to say that you're doing pretty well. There are a few places here and there in this chapter that sound odd and kinky but overall, it's good.
| Shinimegami chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
w00t! a REAL good BaralaixPaine fic by the far! I love it!