Reviews for A Visitor and a Piece of Paper
SubparShitIWroteInHighschool chapter 2 . 10/30/2008
i really like where your going with this story please update soon!
Mantinas chapter 2 . 8/27/2006
Great story!
SmolxSmoodee chapter 2 . 8/26/2006
benisabigot chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
srry but i have to mention this jim going from complete trust to dont you touch him rat boy is confuzzling
Spaugs chapter 2 . 8/17/2005
Cool! Very interesting. You need to work on your paragraph spacing though. Please finish this chapter!
sharaku chapter 2 . 5/18/2005
I am interested!
KatCarre chapter 2 . 4/20/2005
I love this story, so glad you decided to continue it! (Just as long as it doesn't take you another year to update again!)

Love Sandy's character, and the way you reflect Willard's jumbled up thoughts. Keep on writing, I love this story! :)

almighty lord of flop chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
very good story so far plz give more chappies and she is going to his house to meet ben isnt she
Xeno Night chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
It was written alright. When does his new little rat friend come in? Very good story. Please, write more.
Heavenmetal chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
interesting story. Is there going to be more to this? If so, I really hope this isn't going to be a romance cause that'd be weird (in a bad way) but I'd still read it. :D Anyway, I'm a huge fan of the Willard remake and I think you really have his character down.