Reviews for Innocent Dream
Sango Demon Slayer Chick chapter 2 . 11/17/2004
this story is great! keep up the great work! well ja ne!
wiltedviolets chapter 2 . 10/30/2004
Wow . . . when I started to read this, I didn't realize it had been so long wince your last update. This is good.
aichan18 chapter 2 . 7/26/2004
That was very well writting. Better than anything

I could ever do. And I loved it! Please, please write more! It is very interesting.
Museless Shinigami chapter 2 . 6/26/2004
GREAT!I am loving in all honesty I'd love it if it included this is really quite 's well written and it's making me wanna keep reading!
Seaouryou chapter 2 . 5/26/2004
I certainly hope you continue. Kohaku/Rin is hard to come by.
suicide-greeting chapter 2 . 5/8/2004
i like it a lot but i think maybe u should put this story uinder angst, romance... who knows u might even get more ppl 2 read it cos it describes the story better or at least right now... i have another suggestion...when i read this 2 songs got in my head m,aybe u could use them in a chapter as a songfic? they're both by blink-182...down and here's your letter
The drops of rain they fall all over
This awkward silence makes me crazy
The glow inside burns light upon her
I'll try to kiss you if you let me
(this can't be the end)
Tidal waves they rip right through me
Tears from eyes worn cold and sad
Pick me up now, I need you so bad
Down down down down
Down down down down
It gets me so
Down down down down
Down down down down
It gets me so
Your vows of silence fall all over
The look in your eyes makes me crazy
I feel the darkness break upon her
I'll take you over if you let me
(You did this)
Tidal waves they rip right through me
Tears from eyes worn cold and sad
Pick me up now, I need you so bad.
Down down down down
Down down down down
It gets me so
Down down down down
Down down down down
It gets me so
Cut the skin to the bone
Fall asleep all alone
Hear your voice in the dark
Lose myself in your eyes
Choke my voice Say goodnight
as the world falls apart
Fuck I can't let this kill me, let go
I need some more time to fix this
Here's a letter for you
But the words get confused
And the conversation dies
Apologize for the past
Talk some shit take it back
Are we cursed to this life
Fuck I can't let this kill me, let go
I need some more time to fix this problem
I need some more time to fix this problem
I need some more time to fix this
I'm talking to the ceiling
My life just lost all meaning
Do one thing for me tonight
I'm dying in this silence
The last star left in heaven
Is falling down to earth and
Do you still feel the same way
Do you still feel the same way
Fuck I can't let this kill me, let go
I need some more time to fix this problem
I need some more time to fix this problem
I need some more time to fix this
SilverWolf-Ryuki chapter 2 . 1/28/2004
yay! a rin/kohaku! very unusual, yet kawaii pairing. well, i hope u continue.
sailorpsychosis chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
Aw, too bad these chapters are so short! I'm really curious about what will happen next. There aren't very many Kohaku-centric fics out there, so this should be interesting...
SilverBlood666 chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
I LOVE THIS! This story is awesome! You HAVE to update soon! Now you have one more reviewer to deal with!
Keep it up! Update soon!
~Jillian
Stripe chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
Good story,but there's these little iK things that pop up...
Forever and a Day chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
Like the idea, can't wait for the next chappy. .
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
I LUV KOHAKU/RIN ITS SO CUTE SO UPDATE OR ELSE
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
I LUV KOHAKU/RIN ITS SO CUTE SO UPDATE OR ELSE