Reviews for Man In The Mirror
Umbra chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Short and sweet, and quite good. Adore your work.
SilverRider chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Cool...a different point of View from Eric...Interesting
SilverRider chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Cool...a different point of View from Eric...Interesting
Dagmar chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Interesting character piece, and brilliantly done. *applauds*
(I'm still kinda miffed you didn't use "my" line after all. *sulk*)
cmar chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
You said I would like this, and I do. Very thoughtful and even multi-leveled. Good to see Eric think about what he did and realize it was wrong, not so much for the men he killed as for himself. At the very least, an action like that should never be taken lightly, and this shows him facing the implications squarely.
He should feel guilty (in my opinion, anyway) but hopefully will go on from here to bring the conflicting parts of himself together into a better person. One of the things that can make a story outstanding is the way it realistically shows the protagonist changing, let's hope this will be such an experience for Eric.
God, I'm longwinded.