|Reviews for The Colour of Wallpaper|
| VickyVicarious chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
GAH. YES, this is it! It's so - so gah. I LOVE the Kyou voice you have here, and how it goes from what I think is this happy awkward teen unrequitedness thing but turns into lockedup Kyou with his hopeless fantasy is so well- DONE...
Gah, you just keep making me all incoherent and capslock-y. I love it.
| kitkaht chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
This is so sad, but very sweet.
| HIDDENNONEOF chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Made me think of 'The Yellow Wallpaper' ... but it was really good!
| Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
I love it! Even if it is depressing, it's still a good story.
| Yukako chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
i love your writing style ::claps::
for lack of better things to say, i'll leave you with a big HUG and much much luuve!
| Jetster chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
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| JadOo chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
KYOU AND TOHRU! (I don't believe I know anybody else who brought someone else a bowl of soup...it was porridge, but whaat's the diff?) Anyhow, that's just my guess. It could be Haru for all I know, since it applies coz Rin is technically gone.
Nevertheless, the rambling thoughts thingem was actually pretty good. :)
| Tragedy Catalyst chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
again, good fic. I like your depressing moods. They fit in with...me. I think the character is Kyo and he's talking about Tohru of course.
| Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Your style of writing is very interesting! I've never really seen anything like it, but I really loved the way you put things in. I loved the idea you had and what the topics were, and how you described things so poetically, yet in a way in which we can relate to and enjoy. It was fun reading this, and it was very angsty! But, romantic, too. I wish it had been longer with maybe some action of flashbacks-heck, I wish you had turnedt his into a story. I am sure it would turn out to be great. The character was Kyo,wasn't it? At first I thought it was Akito, but then when it said "when I brought you soup" I know it was Kyo, and that made me happy. I am a total Kyoru junky! He was talking about Toru, right? Hm. I would have thought Kyo would ended up with her. I hope you will make a sequel or something.
| XxSacredDreamsxX chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
This is really sweet...I know it's a one-shot type thing, but my best friend and I love it. Please consider continuing!
| Firefly-Fox chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
That was really good! I just have one question though, um...let's see, oh yeah, when you say that she's gone, is she simply gone as in moved some where else, or has she moved on? Perhaps she even died? Hm...was just wondering, or maybe it was to be a mystery? heheheh mysteries are fun! anywho, GREAT JOB I LIKE YOUR WRITTINGS, STORIES, THINGS!
| smiley town chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Wah D' That's so sad and sweet and goddammit, it's like, so good...
Good job. You made me love FFN again.
| animelvr4evr chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
ehh its kyo n tohru osnt it nehh?
| Emmi-chan chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Poor Kyou. He's just so shy! I love him, he is just so funny XD I love your fic! It has the format of a simple fic, but it's really in-depth. Bravo!
| bubblegum koala girl chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
oh mah god that was awesome! _ very beautifully written. kyou about tohru, right? well... duh. _ sometimes i have a thing for stating the obvious. _ anyways. that was superb. you definately have kyou in character here; your sense of language, grammer and imagery is quite fluid and keeps the reader gripped. i loved it to pieces! _ good luck in the future!