Reviews for When nothing works
Firayne chapter 5 . 2/22/2005
I like the concept, but the story seems extremely rushed. How can Riddel decide that she truly loves Karsh, when she had no feelings towards him before, in a matter of hours? The chapters are all very short, and that adds to the rushing process, I think. Don't take this as a flame, because it's not. I just wanted to express my opinion.
ilovesoup1 chapter 5 . 8/21/2004
o0o! update..! ']
Kt MacG chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
It's a good story (the better one out of the 2 I read), but you should work on the paragraphing. Sometimes it gets hard to read. Other than that, the storyline's great, and the coupling's great (I love KarshRiddel fics)! Great fic!

Kt MacG

P.S. Hm... maybe I can beg you to a GuileSteena fic (I'm new to these, and there's only about 5 on the site. I read them all and liked most of them... except where they thought he was Magus... I don't agree). Then, I can read at least ONE good fic about those two...
crazycutie2 chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
good job!
Tukuyomi chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
Nice fic! There aren't so many Karsh/Riddel fics here. Just make them get together, you hear? Update soon!