Reviews for Days Without Clouds
Annibellee chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Aw. D: That was so sad. :'(
dicingalice chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
*looks at you, slack jawed*

wtf, you just got me cold, man.

this is TERRIBLE!

in a fantastic way. but still.
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
This is well done.
Raiment chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
omg...that...really affected me.

I really wasn't expecting that at all...very well done.
Paper Fans chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
The last few lines hurt me... in my HEART! (sobs)
Dreaming of Everything chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
*sniff*

I felt my heart (or at least my OTP) break a little during that particular chapter, but I was reassured shortly afterwards. Honestly, reading manga is bad for my nerves...

But more on-topic, this was wonderfully done, being both a well-thought-out AU and quite possible, canon events ignored-people (myself included!) seem to forget that ninja would probably have a *very* short expected life span.

The ending was perfect, and the format particularly well-suited for the idea itself. Telling it from Chouji's point of view (despite the fact that he's dead) gives a much clearer frame of reference, without the tangle of guilt, loss and more guilt Shikamaru is doubtless feeling. You do a good job of portraying that as well, actually, which is nice.
blackhaze666 chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
CHOUJIS DEAD! but but but..Chouji didnt die from the pill if thats what yer suggesting in here! he didnt! wah! this makes me so sad! to event think hes dead! *sobs*
Jane chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
...O.o Good grief, it's a testament to you that that ficlet flowed so naturally and beautifully that the end twist threw me completely!

Such a good ficlet, and scary because it's all too plausible ;_;
kokonutsu chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
You have a way for writing as if everything seems so natural...the characters, their dialoges. I just love this.
wellduh chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Postscript:

...realize that this sounds heartbreakingly familiar. Because what happened the first mission Kakashi led?

Wow.
wellduh chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
...

*makes odd noise*

...

Dammit. I want to cry.

...

Brilliant writing. You wrote it when it was still actually a possible outcome, didn't you? Wow.

I loved this.
cutiechibi chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
So during my free time I'm looking through your fics and all the ShikaChouji ones since I'm now a huge fan of them. Damn, this one hurt my heart to read, because that's exactly what would happen if Chouji died.
S h i b b i e chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Nothing short of brilliant.
Wendy Clear chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Short and brilliant. -goes to see if you have other one-shots like this one-
Vee-San chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
;_; i was so not expecting that...why oh why did Chouji-kun have to die V_V *hugs the story as she sniffles pathetically*

VDG
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