Reviews for The Burning Time
a breezy era chapter 3 . 1/23/2004
First of all, this was an amazing chapter. I loved the laid back feel, the way you described Italy...it is oh so true. I lived in Trieste for 1 1/2 years when I was little, 3 or 4 years old at the time mainly, and once you get out of the city you can find places like this that are oh so calm and happy. I love the relationship development with Robin and Amon, and it's interesting how it hurt her to not be in the same room before. Then there was the cute 15 year old witch who sleeps in the nude thing...that was so cute . Amazing job, and keep writing. You're fiction is fantastic. - Genia
Vitani FyreWolf chapter 2 . 1/22/2004
Hey! Nice fic you've got started, here! I spent the summer in Italy, so I'm really enjoying all the Italian in there, makes for a lovely effect (and I understood it, which made me very proud!). This is an interesting concept - them heading to Italy. I want to see what happens to them there!
Kala Mekiv chapter 2 . 1/22/2004
O... I'm lovin' every word in this story. Defintely keep up the good work! *goes to archive on UnS* :)
Shiroyuki Hikari chapter 2 . 1/21/2004
Wow what a surprise a the end...this is definitely one of the best WHR fanfic I've read.
Keep up the good work! I will be waiting for your next chapter.
a breezy era chapter 2 . 1/21/2004
This is absolutely terrific. I absolutely love the mix of Italian in here. I understood a bit because of knowing Spanish, but it was a really good idea to add the thing at the end. By all means, keep going with it. I think it adds flavor. As far as the relationship between Robin and Amon, I like how it's going. "Molto bello" seemed to make Robin quite flustered. I love Bishonen...anyway . A terrific chapter, but you did include a couple little things that made me really curious that would be good to follow out in the next chapter, so as not to leave hanging. Amon recieves a cellphone message - so do they recieve the message because they're going to italy, or do they go to Italy becasue they recieve the text message? Other than that, it would be fantastic to explore the grandmother's connection to the "huntsman." Fantastic story. Keep writing! - Genia
Kitta chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
Cool! Well written and a good start...please update soon!
a breezy era chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
I just want to compliment you on this fabulous beginning to a great fanfic. You've opened up many many doors of ideas and such in this introduction, and I look forward to seeing Robin and Amon's relationship grow. I also like the 30 feet deal. I look forward to developing your theory on that. Good job! I'm following your writing wherever it goes! Love - Genia
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