|Reviews for Paragon|
| wat chapter 1 . 3/15
(sing-song) what the fuuuuuuuuuu-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck.
| hypertonic chapter 11 . 5/6/2013
OH MY GOD
| Fioleefan chapter 11 . 3/3/2013
Wow. I read this all in one sitting... It was just so... Amazing. Bravo.
| tsukinopen chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
| Celadon Catamount chapter 11 . 11/17/2011
I just finished reading this story. I read it in one sitting, in the wee hours of the morning (it's almost 4am now). Wow, that was quite a ride! I'm glad I had my pillow handy for hugging purposes. I really don't know if I have adequate words to express how amazing this story is...
The entire time I was trying to predict what would happen, and what was really going on. In most stores I have become very good at that. I did know from the beginning what was really in the forbidden room, and I had complete faith in Ron. But your twists really threw me... I nearly strangled my laptop screen when Ron was killing Kim's family ("BUT RON IS NOT EVIL, NOOOOO!") and you definitely did not give me the ending that I was expecting. And I love it when an author delivers the unexpected and does it well! This is the best horror/tragedy fanfic I have ever read. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to go watch a happy Kim Possible episode on YouTube to reset my brain. :)
Write on - Celadon Catamount
| AnnieJune19 chapter 10 . 11/2/2011
This story was one of the most disturbing things I've read, but I loved it to pieces. Absolutely incredible. Perfect ending, I had no idea what was going to happen next. I'm so glad this had a "happy" ending. Just incredible.
| alyabunny chapter 2 . 8/2/2011
...wow...this is AWESOME...I was a little skeptical 'cause I don't read fics about american cartoons usually...but I'm REALLY REALLY REALLY GLAD I DID!
| Kitty O chapter 10 . 7/31/2011
I cried at the beginning. I've never done that before,Not on ff, but I'm overtired.
The ending was not horrible but not happy. Ron has another's body forever and will be remembered as a killer. And he KILLED HER FAMILY! What about Ron's family? Depressing.
Course, the thing about grief is it can also make your belief in God stronger. But then I don't believe in trapped spirits or any of that :)
Nice story. The writing was confusing in parts, but overall...
| Kitty O chapter 8 . 7/31/2011
Ew. Just ew.
| Kitty O chapter 7 . 7/31/2011
Geez there were tears in my eyes. Unrequited love!
| Kitty O chapter 3 . 7/31/2011
Got herefrom tv tropes, don't watch K.P. But I'm enjoying anyway!
| BrownieStick chapter 11 . 7/17/2011
The first thing that went through my head when i finished this was 'motherfucker!'
..and then it hit me how ironic that was and i laughed hysterically for a few seconds. xD But seriously.. Holy crap! This should be a movie. All of the imagery and everything was so perfect i could see it all in my head and it would look amazing on the big screen.
The only thing that bothered me was josh talking religion in the end. That just seemed so random.. I think it would've come across better if maybe religion had been an overall theme through the whole thing.
Also, the original ending definitely wasn't happy, but i liked it better than them killing themselves. Though.. I think it would've been kinda poetic if somewhere down the line ron had snapped and started killing people for real. I mean seriously.. who could possibly see and go through everything he did and then just live a normal life, even in his own body?
Lol. Anyway i really hope you still check this account or whatever. I know it's been for freaking ever since you posted this.
| Muzzlehatch chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
I've been meaning to read this ever since I saw your artwork for it nearly two years ago.
| DMx chapter 10 . 7/6/2009
Happy ending ? kims family is dead
| RavenFortuna chapter 10 . 6/10/2008
Super Special Awesome Wonderfull Number One Masterpiece story.
This was one of the best written story i ever read in