Reviews for Jack's Child
treasuretrove chapter 10 . 1/26/2005
I have a couple of suggestions:

- your story moves too quickly, you need to explain things more. describe Jacklyn's feelings more, and be more descriptive towards the setting and people's reactions, it feels like you're just rushing through the story to get to the end quickly; I didn't get a very good picture of what was happening

- I don't think Jack would congratulate his daughter on killing an innocent sailor, he's not that kind of person. also, I don't think she would kill anyone, since she's so respectable
Rocks-my-socks chapter 14 . 1/26/2005
O no! that git! up date give me an update.
Rocks-my-socks chapter 13 . 1/26/2005
Loving it, savvy?
cursebreaker chapter 14 . 1/25/2005
omigod. you leave me hanging like that?

Reese Sparrow chapter 14 . 1/25/2005
Great chapter! I see the tables have turned and not for the good!Please update sono! I cna't wait to see what happens!TA,TA!
Johnnycakesdepp chapter 13 . 8/8/2004
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next.
Reese Sparrow chapter 13 . 8/8/2004
Great chapter! I love the plan! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more! TA!
Johnnycakesdepp chapter 12 . 7/31/2004
This is a good story but I must say that Anamaria isn't being very motherly. You would think that if you hadn't seen your daughter in 13 years you would talk to her lot more, spened more time together, be worried, cry and a whole shitload of other stuff.
David Hatter chapter 12 . 7/14/2004
I love it so please write/update more.

Strawby168 chapter 12 . 7/1/2004
love your ficcy. more.
Reese Sparrow chapter 12 . 7/1/2004
Good chapter! Please update soon! I can't wait ta see wha' else is in store!TA!
Reese Sparrow chapter 11 . 6/29/2004
I Love tha' name!Congratz! Sorry 'bout yer Grand-mothers, though! I glad ye updated! I love the way ye write Jackie an' Anamaria!Me fav. line in this chapter w's: “Good, now go show him who’s boss. Me.
MiSSZ-SPARR0W chapter 11 . 6/29/2004
this story is great! jacklyn is so cool lol... in my story jacks daughter is named jacquelyn lol, so basically same idea.. keep going!
David Hatter chapter 11 . 6/29/2004
I'm a potc fan too. i love johnny depp and his character Jack Sparrow. I love the story you should write more soon. If your wandering (sorry can't spell)who Sara Lee Marrowder is she is a pirate I made up after I saw potc the first time and know she's a character in one of my storys too. you're a good writer so please write more?

Ilove it.

~Sara Lee Marrowder (Amy)
JessieRose chapter 11 . 6/29/2004
This is a really goos story, I've just read all eleven chapters! Great stuff! Congrats on the baby by the way! Please write more soon! _

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