Reviews for Deliverance
Mittzy chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
great story

poor Malik .
Sacred Phoenix Of Nephthys chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
O.O! Really good!
Demented Insane Spirit chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
aint this based on an Evanescence song? I didnt read any before notes... luved it!
Mooshu-Yogo-LittleBaku chapter 1 . 6/19/2004

Raine: was very depressing

aerinoutlander chapter 1 . 3/25/2004
So sweet! Yet funny. Tee-hee poor Malik. Though Malik is my favorite character... *frowns* poor Malik. Oh well... *reads about another guy killing himself*
Kayrie chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
Depressing, indeed. Good setting. The only complaints are these:
a. the first line says 'u.' write the full word.
b. one typo
JadedHarmony chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
HOW COULD YOU? Not only did you make Malik try to kill himselfand then poor Isis found him and was heartbroken! Even poor Marik was going to die! Have you no heart?
Oh yeah, by the way, its a good story...please continue.
Ps: Did any of the above even make sense? Please continue again... _