|Reviews for First Kiss|
| pearlzep chapter 18 . 3/1
I love you writing style! I hope you continue to write and that your works will be published someday. I will definitely buy your book if that happens! Kudos to your amazing ability and to this wonderful story!
| Oliver chapter 18 . 1/9
That was beautiful(by the way im only 10 years old) I love it! I love it so much i cried olmost the whole last 3 chapters...Make more fanfictions for maybe Adventure Time unless u already did or u dont want to or know about it...I really LOVE ur work i LOVE it its flawless i mean ther is no mistakes apon the spelling im pretty sure and the timeline is so much more neat than other fanfictions timelines. Ur work is a PIECE OF ART! Plus i read a lot of fanfictions about peter pan and i really like them... O.K. here is the truth: imactuallyagirlandikindahaveacrushonpeterpan...There i said it sorry for confusing u. And yes i know im a bitch.
| Selena Gomez chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
I saw Peter Pan and I was on Wizards of Waverly FAN FIC EVER!No jk...BEST PETER PAN FAN FIC EVER!
| Jasmineusfr chapter 18 . 12/18/2013
I am. Truly in love with this story. Everything was so good. So magical. That i'm almost sad that it has too end. This story makes me want to read Peter and Wendy's never ending take even after they died. I dunno, i love you so much for making this story. It's beautiful. It really is. I read this whole story today. And i'm baffled. I'm speechless. I love every single part of it. Thank you. Thank you for sharing about peter and wendy's story.
| DarkFay chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
I enjoyed this very much, thank you! The definition of what Americans are made me laugh, too.
| Kagome chapter 11 . 12/11/2013
You mean 5 chapters
| vinitapepperdog1983 chapter 18 . 9/25/2013
Beautiful, all the way.
| kellinor chapter 18 . 7/14/2013
I just finished this story, forgoing sleep for it actually, and it has been WONDERFUL. Your writing is superb, as is the story, plot, portrayal of emotion...everything! I just about died reading the end. AMAZING SIMPLY AMAZING!
| Jade chapter 18 . 6/25/2013
I loved all the chapters i wish this was a movie also just to actually see it out of my mind :) You are indeed a very creative writer i hope to hear more of your stories soon
| Crocgirl9219 chapter 10 . 4/9/2013
You made Peters character perfect. It was so perfect I had to read it in pices so as not to be overwhelmed.
| Claire chapter 3 . 3/7/2013
Whoa Peter's growing? and he has a gigantic king sized bed? Lucky him :) all I have is a tiny twin sized bunk bed. ( my younger sister and I can't wait to have our own rooms lol ) I think it's cool that Wendy is older and more mature in this story, but also has this childish personality; reminds me a little of myself :) most of the time I act like a small grown up, and at times when I want to just let go of all the responibilties of being a 15 year old,I act like a child. I Love this story! please write more of these :)
| Brianna chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
OMG hi! Sorry,ive been nknown to be hyper anyway,im sorry about not i do i see the NEXT button,telling me there is another chapter and i haaaaaaave to click it!I've been reading this story non stop ever since 5:00 and it almost mid-night now!Sorry,more hyper i loove your story,your a really good writer.I like the style that you write in,giving all the detail and helps the about the sex chapter,i mean it wasent really a big deal and everyone made it into i dont think it mattered,probably because i can talk freely about sex and not be pruny?But whatever!Sorry im writing this all in a rush,its like mid-night and im starting to see shapes from staying up without , I love you(hope that didnt aound pedophile-ish) and peaceskies 3
PS:You should be an author,you write soo well!Bye!
| Xitlalit123 chapter 18 . 2/2/2013
Another amazing story... XD
| edea001 chapter 18 . 1/29/2013
this ending just made me cry so much... amazing, enchanting, beautiful, loving in every single way possible.
| merlioske chapter 14 . 12/23/2012
well d'aaaaaaw x3 that was THE cutest proposal i've ever seen i must say x33333