Reviews for Ms Independent Part One
Sleeping Owl chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
I know you won't, it's been way too long, but it would be nice if you updated this if you decide it hasn't been too long.
Great work
Seafoam Soprano chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I really enjoyed this story and I would love to hear more.

Serenade chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
please update sooon
Mandykur chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
azerjaban chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Yay Betty woke up!
Vinyaya chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
are you ever gonna continue this? coz i really like the way it seems to be going.
HoneyBee1 chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Wow, you need to continue this. This is a fascinating story, and I would like to see Betty grow a backbone for once and stand on her own two feet instead depending on that carrot top. He2x, keep up the good work!
SiriusBlackOrSiriusGold chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Great chapter. But in the diary para, there should be a li'l more spacing... :D
Moofie Lou chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
update soon, please! me likey it alot!
Enchanting Eyes chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
This was really good, I hope you get the urge to finish the story!
Tuxedo Mark chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Nice story! There were some spelling and punctuation errors, and it some of the dialogue during the confrontation was confusing. Also, you made some errors. Betty's cat is named Caramel, not Sam. Also, Betty's sister is named Polly, not Pam. Overall, though, it was enjoyable to read. Please write a follow-up!
qwerty313 chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Interesting start :D I'm curious as to what's going to happen now; please continue! _ ::hopes it will be BR::
Dead Composer chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
There is now an Archie category.
EarthDaughter chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
Awesome! Betty finally ditches Archie! All the characters were in character, and I love your writing style. Spread the betty ditches archie love!
SapphireObsessed chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
I thought it was pretty boring...
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