Reviews for THE MISSION
Erana chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Just read chapter one of this, and while I love the idea there's a problem that detracts from the quality of the story. The Secret Service *never* leave the President alone. He'd've never been allowed to get into that ambulance, but instead would've been escorted there by his security. Especially after an attack like you described.
luv24Alias chapter 6 . 6/21/2004
it's really good, can u introduced the chase and kim thing in the story soon
Icarus Falling02 chapter 5 . 2/27/2004
I like it. Good Job. Is this pre michelle? I'm guessing it is.
ninabauer chapter 2 . 1/25/2004
Good continuation.:)But we still don't know what's with our Jack!Please more!:):)
ninabauer chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
Very emotional first chapter!
Anxiously and impatiently waiting for ones!
Good job!:)
Icarus Falling02 chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
I like it. One problem though. If there is that much blood Jack A. should die becuase major artieres were cut, unless they have people trying to hold them shut. B. JACK CAN"T DIE, unless the entire world goes becuase its JAck Bauer the unstoppable person. I like it though. Very good.