Reviews for Entwinement: Ashes
SolarBane chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
This fic actually revolves around the relationship I have... it's a long distance one, and I vowed that I could go to her once I get my license. Almost like Garet here... We'll find you... and I'll find her. All in all a great one-shot... has potential to be more than that though... this one could continue if you wanted.
Feonyx chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
That was pretty good. It mingled the game-dialogue with original material well, not to mention providing realistic background-thoughts to the game quotes. It's good as a one-shot, but feels like it could keep going a little longer (through TLA, that'd be) so you might want to consider a second chapter. (I'd read it.)