|Reviews for Critical Path: repost|
| girlintheyankeeshat chapter 8 . 2/11/2004
Wow. Painstakingly brilliant, I actually cried hard at that last part. This story just goes from strength to strength.
| athingsublime chapter 7 . 2/6/2004
I'm very tempted to leave the kind of review that I said I usually leave on FF, but I'll be good ;) I love this story, Shellie, and I love your Luka and Abby. They're not exactly the Luka and Abby of the show, but they feel like them, if that makes any sense. Post more soon!
| Fire Dancer1 chapter 6 . 2/2/2004
Shellie, I love it. I'm so glad you're posting this section of my favorite saga. I love that it's in Abby's POV; you write her so well. Can't wait for more!
| girlintheyankeeshat chapter 6 . 2/1/2004
Seeing as here in the UK, we've just got season ten I was enthralled by Abby's ambiguity towards Carter in this chapter and I loved: "I don't want a drink, I don't want a cigarette; I want my husband to wake up and come watch laundry with me". Just perfect. Can't wait fot the next part!
| mutant doc chapter 6 . 1/31/2004
Its a pleasure to read a well-written and well-planned story. I have enjoyed all of your stories and this one is certainly of the high caliber I've come to expect and appreciate! I like that it contains familiar characters but is written from a different perspective than your other work. The attention you have put into the writing is obvious. Usually when I know where a story starts (ch.1 of CP) and ends (epilogue of RD), I lose interest but this one has kept me checking frequently for updates. Thanks for putting time and care into the writing.
| Californiagirl2 chapter 6 . 1/31/2004
Wonderful to see another chapter. Great stuff!