|Reviews for Sentience|
| Hj marsh chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I love this. Pleeeeaaaase moooorrrre! Your story Os a work of art. I would really enjoy reading loads more chapters of your FANtastic story. Your fan hj marsh
| HopelessxRomanticx1993 chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Aw, I just Love fluffies and happy endings. I'm a HxS fan, too.
| Sealgirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
It's a good story, well written and interesting. Those two really do need a proper shove in the right direction, don't they!
There are lots of good touches in it. I dont think you were being pretentious putting in some literary allusions, it adds to the story. You give a good visual impression of the Ball itself, and Hand and Sheila are brought together in a believable way.
It could do with a little tidying up in places, especially the E/D part.
But I still enjoyed it and think it is a really good idea.
| RedLion2 chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Wonderful. I was just thinking about this show a few days ago, and decided to check out a few fan fics on it. This was amazingly good. I hope you write another...RL2
| Jimi Hydroxxx chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
This is really good. I really like it. You really fleshed out your characters. Only one complaint you left the Diane/Eric thread very loose. It was like you just went "HEY THEY ARE A COUPLE! I DON'T FEEL LIKE WRITTING THIS SUBPLOT ANYMORE!" but I couldn't do any better. Anyways your writting style is really good. I'd like to read your other stuff, if you have any. Peace out, homie.