Reviews for Sentience
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28
Tão linda continue escrevendo mais desta história
Kika chapter 1 . 4/28
Sou fã de Eric e Diana e rank e Sheila está história e linda amei sua escrita publique mais
Viviane Brasil chapter 1 . 4/28
Linda história continue escrevendo mais estou amando
Hj marsh chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I love this. Pleeeeaaaase moooorrrre! Your story Os a work of art. I would really enjoy reading loads more chapters of your FANtastic story. Your fan hj marsh
HopelessxRomanticx1993 chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Aw, I just Love fluffies and happy endings. I'm a HxS fan, too.
Sealgirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
Hi Fay,

It's a good story, well written and interesting. Those two really do need a proper shove in the right direction, don't they!

There are lots of good touches in it. I dont think you were being pretentious putting in some literary allusions, it adds to the story. You give a good visual impression of the Ball itself, and Hand and Sheila are brought together in a believable way.

It could do with a little tidying up in places, especially the E/D part.

But I still enjoyed it and think it is a really good idea.

RedLion2 chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Wonderful. I was just thinking about this show a few days ago, and decided to check out a few fan fics on it. This was amazingly good. I hope you write another...RL2
Jimi Hydroxxx chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
This is really good. I really like it. You really fleshed out your characters. Only one complaint you left the Diane/Eric thread very loose. It was like you just went "HEY THEY ARE A COUPLE! I DON'T FEEL LIKE WRITTING THIS SUBPLOT ANYMORE!" but I couldn't do any better. Anyways your writting style is really good. I'd like to read your other stuff, if you have any. Peace out, homie.
-Jimi Hydrox