|Reviews for Du'elea|
| Scholar chapter 5 . 2/5/2004
Wow, this is an incredible story! I love the twist. I had a feeling Miriel had to do with Ar-Pharazon, b/c her name was Tar-Miriel. Did you make this part up of expand on it from the Sil? (Btw, the part where Sauron comes out, VERY COOL.) Poor Faramir. Will he find the scroll or a copy of the scroll his father destroyed, and is Miriel actually good? What has happened to the others who have seen her and had this fate? Keep up the awesome work. -S
| Narya's Bane chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
I was waiting for the answers before I decided what I thought of this story and I must certainly admit I am quite taken with it so far. The imagery is just amazing- there are a couple little moments that seem a bit out of place, but they are few and far between. The amazing periods around them far outweigh any difficulty I might have had.
Well done- and please do continue in at least as timely a manner as the last update. Pretty please?
| arwens-light chapter 5 . 2/4/2004
auh! its so sad! and bloody...kinda freaky scary, but still good...i don't get the bad spirit thingy...if its trying to kill him now, why not when he was a boy? anyways, just confused, but that's ok...
| arwens-light chapter 4 . 2/4/2004
hm...oh! aragorn's son was so adorable in the movie! i have a picture of all three of them too! anyways, that's so sad...i don't want faramir to go mad like his father...m...i hope that the nightmare goes away but i don't think you'll do that, i think you're gonna add another cliff hanger...we'll see...
| arwens-light chapter 3 . 2/4/2004
ah! oh, its so creapy and sad at the same time...m...its really good though...kinda scared me...i'm sorry, i've had a lot of homework, plus i have to register for the SAT's...m...don't wanna but i gotta...anywyas, a bunch of social stuff that i don't wanna deal with either...m...good chapter...i'm going on to number four!
| Lydia2 chapter 5 . 2/4/2004
This is getting interesting. Are you still feeling generous tonight? *g* And how many more chapters will there be?
| Arahiril chapter 5 . 2/4/2004
Three chapters in one day! And "Fell Wound" updated too! You have made my day better! Yes, I have read the Silmarillion - but I didn't make the connection between Miriel and Amee Miriel. And the meaning of Amee slipped by me. *teehee* I'm glad you didn't give away the story. Aw... Faramir is SO unhappy right now - and he's being so - curt (?) - with Eowyn. I can't really describe it, but the way you portray him - it's just marvellous. GREAT idea with the potions and such - did you make that up yourself? If so, BRAVO! It is great. Faramir's suffering through his dreams is just wonderful - your language, and description of the dreams themselves - WOW. I hope you continue this story, and allow Faramir to find a way to either fight off the dreams, or get someone else to help him! He's not himself! Great job again! Keep up the EXCELLENT work!
| Callie3 chapter 5 . 2/4/2004
Wow! I really enjoyed all the parts about Numenor, it was really interesting. I was amazed when you said at the bottum that it was all made up! It was written exactly like Tolkien would have! The thing at the end about taking care of the ones he loved, does that mean he thinks that he is going to die? Uh oh! Thats bad! Well please update soon!
| Vicki chapter 5 . 2/4/2004
Very good story. Hopefully chapter 6 will be posted soon.
| Catmint chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
| the evil witch queen chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
oh uh, this cannot be good.
poor eowyn. everyone close to him will suffer if he lets her get him.
well, very good story, quite creepy too, very effective.
keep up the good work!
| arwens-light chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
a...oh, for a second faramir sounded like his father...scary...is this the third sequal? m...well, keep writing! its good...
| arwens-light chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
weird...but its good...and it denethor actually concerned about FAramir? wow...this is great...i can't wait to read chatper 2...aw! and how faramir called boromir "bem" is so adoreably cute! sorry, anyways...
| Arahiril chapter 2 . 1/26/2004
Spooky. REALLY spooky. *shivers run up and down spine* But - it's a GREAT story. I love the idea of some "ancient ghost" running amuck in Minas Tirith. Faramir's near-death brush with an arrow and then being saved like that - strange. Denethor's caring for his son was a great thing - but locking away the papers - will Faramir find the chest? And how many years is it since the last victim? How long does Faramir have? *dashes off to get Tale of Years* Hm... EEP! Too hard to figure out. Just a quick question: does the meaning of "Amee Miriel" have anything at all to do with the future plot? If not - hm... "Miriel" is jewel-like or something like that - but what is Amee? Faramir's lack of sleep is troubling, since Belecthor didn't say anything about his nightmares either... Update soon, if at all possible please!
| Lilya chapter 2 . 1/26/2004
Wow, that's great! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Eowyn'll play a part too