Reviews for Web of Lies: Revelations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am obsessed with father-like Severus too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for telling me what exactly people meant when they claimed a work to be "an all time favourite." I think I understand now, and I have to thank you for that. I was very sorry to see your rant in some previous chapter(s?) about people complaining about - well, from anything to everything. True, your chapters are short, and also true that your English isn't great (but if you come from a place where the language isn't very prioritised, then it's very good and much better than I would have expected). And yes, some characters are OoC. BUT. But this is FANFICTION! One doesn't come here to read perfect English - you have books by actual authors for that - or to see characters act as perfect reflections of their book self - go reread JKR for that! If one prefers characters interact without deviating much from the standard set, feel free to browse countless others fics out there. If the chapters are short, so what? They are more. The story length won't change. Seriously, every person has their own fantasies they would like to see converted into a storyline, and you can't go on flaming every story you click on that doesn't match your notions! (Sorry. I have no idea why I'm writing this here, because the flamers aren't going to read this. I just was very horrified when there seemed to be a very real possibility of you giving up on the story for good. (Yeah, yeah, it was already completed, I know, but the thread was thin enough to drive the fear home.) So just - THANK YOU for seeing this to the end.) One of my favourite things about this work was the way you potrayed Dumbledore and Snape and McGonagall. The first two were a bit OoC for me - especially in the beginning - but some chapters later I got used to it. Dumbledore and Snape are my absolute favourites, and rare are the authors who potray them the way I want to see them. I guess it's obvious by now, but just lemme say it - *takes a deep breath* I LOVED THIS THING! THANK YOU FOR SHARING IT WITH US! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Are they just ignoring Sirius' rights as his godfather? Kinda disgusted with Harry that he hasn't tried talking to him or Remus |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s so weird to think that this fic is 18 years old |
![]() ![]() Fab work you have written.. dont let stupid people get to you bet they havent written any stories.. chin up stiff upper lip its my british way! X |
![]() ![]() Go to a government aided school in TN, India. That'll show you how bad they do English. |
![]() ![]() Hey, FireWolf here. Wanted to say that I love your work and you should keep doing what you love. I wish you would make more work! I love your chapter lengths, your writing style, and how you change a characters personality. The character development and the plot development is amazing. I hope you continue writing! I hope you could consider me a friend, cuz I consider you one. Great job! |
![]() ![]() No dont end the story! *Gasp* *choking on gasp* *coughing fit* Okay, remind me not to do that again... |
![]() ![]() I dont think that minerva advises snape, or that she says words like hell...But still, its your universe - have fun! - a friend (I think,er., I hope) PS I have went by multiple names - such as: - anonymous - The Hopefull -Firewolf(variations) - A friend |
![]() ![]() WOW, Severus let him call his uncle "sev".! Now everyone knows he is very powerful! I love your work. -firewolf |
![]() ![]() ooh, tension - I LOVE IT. -firewolf |
![]() ![]() Why would the ghost founder tell him! That is so mean. |
![]() ![]() I actually really enjoy it without ron, hermione, remus, lupin, and the others. -firewolf, the hopeful friend, the hopeful, and the friend(hopefully) |
![]() ![]() you freaked me out...When I saw how long this chapter was, I thought someone kidnapped you and replaced you...Oops. hehe. |