Reviews for O Future Tell of Secrets
AmethystElfling chapter 8 . 1/23/2014
No offense but I really hate it when authors state that if they get no reviews then they won't post anymore chapters. Too me it's like your demanding attention.
If you enjoy writing, then just write. If no one reads it then oh well at least you are still doing something you enjoy.
Bandgeek252 chapter 11 . 7/8/2011
I would really love to finish your story. It is really interesting, but there are too many errors and you are hopping around enough to make my head start spinning. I would suggest that you polish it, since it's already complete and you'll get a lot more reviews and better responses.
loretta537 chapter 20 . 4/15/2009
this was a great story! i loved the twist at the end where dumbledore was the bad guy. what happened to tom and stacey, since voldemort is supposed to be dead?
lillyflowers revenge chapter 19 . 1/20/2009
Isn't Athena the Greek Godess of wisdom? Aphrodite was the goddes of love.
SteffieGee chapter 16 . 12/23/2007
i think the traitor is severus snape...idk why but i think so...
hehe. Boom chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
I like it
fluff chapter 4 . 1/27/2006
Oh! I had thought for a second that was Hermione nastly calling Severus her Father!

Then I realized it's their daughter...

Transylvanian chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
I know this is late for a review and you have already finnished the story, but what about Luna.
RadicallyRandom7 chapter 20 . 12/9/2004
Truely Awesome...Confusing at first then it made alot of sence...thank you...
Chaotic Energy chapter 20 . 8/29/2004
Hi Remo,

I finally finished reading "Secrets". You have a remarkable creative talent. I suspect you could put a lot more detail in and have a real substantial story. Have you considered doing your own story? (not fan fic) I really liked how you included greek gods into the story, morphing into something larger than the Hogwart's universe. Reading this story was like being within a dream. At times it was confusing, what with characters impersonating each other, but then dreams tend to do that. You're very focused on relationships and you are competent at putting characters in the right setting to explore those relationships, but I would like to read more about each characters' thoughts. Not too much. Just once in a while break the rythm of the story and explore what someone is thinking for a paragraph or two.

723red chapter 19 . 7/4/2004
Athena is the Greek Goddess of Wisdom, not Love. Aphrodite is the Goddess of Love.

Also, the word 'excepting' as used towards the middle of the chapter should be 'accepting'.

Nice story thus far, lots of twists and turns. It's been a little confusing at times, but not so much that I can't understand.
tomato chapter 20 . 6/27/2004
hey. pretty good...
dopey chapter 20 . 6/23/2004
i love ur story and i can't wait for the sequal b/c i love your story! You are an amazing writer, don't stop.

God bless,

winter blaze chapter 20 . 6/22/2004
this was good very good and i cna't wait to read your sequel
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 20 . 6/22/2004
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter.
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