Reviews for Love, Perhaps?
Noremac1 chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
Didn't you say this was going to have WAY MORE THAN THREE CHAPTERS? So WHY DOESN'T IT YET? \_/
strength-91-possibility-none chapter 2 . 3/12/2006
go get him naruto! update soon!
Lady Samurai chapter 2 . 4/26/2005
Can't believe Naruto was rejected!
Gisela chapter 2 . 4/21/2004
o...- I'm not sure this is the reaction you were aiming for, but I found that story funny. Naruto kissing sasuke then Sasuke beating the crap out of him -
Seriously, there aren't many Naruto stories with Naruto actually taking the initiative. Interesting. Definitely like your writing style. There isn't any fireworks happening in the story yet, but still the style of yours makes each chapter intense or something along those lines. Anyway thanks for the story. Hope you continue with it. I'll be looking foward to reading more of your work.
Tunazap chapter 2 . 3/8/2004
Oh... update! o
Kibaactualy my name chapter 2 . 2/4/2004
Chu have to write mor. It is so good. I think that You shine upon the stars like I am the only person who sees,
Only Your radiance brings me to my knees,
Even as we talk, its like you only tease,
Your love has that effect on me, as only does a disease,
Your grace, your face makes me want to scream,
As if i run out to you and realise it's just a dream
I look up to the moon at night and I cant help but think of you,
I am wondering do you feel the same way too,
My heart would grow every night, through and through
Until my heart could hold only you,
To feel your touch its like heaven,
No one could make me feel like you do at this time,
This moment I only want to hold you
But with all said and done, and all words said true,
I forever know, I could never be with you,
Even though you sit right there, it would not be fair
To take you away from the one who admires you more,
I lay lifeless on a hard, wooden floor,
I imagine you at my door;
scratching, wishing, hoping you would knock,
I try to answer but when i get there my heart falls to the floor like i dont care.
His tears r running under the door i relised i dont want him any more.
my heart has been taken and scars will not heal,
But I know somewhere; there are moments to steal,
Then suddenly a beat and its pumping again,
I look in to his eyes and fall in his soul agiain
Nothing could have prepared me for this feeling,
It felt like the world stopped and I halted breathing.
Only i had no need for breath, no need for life!
Overwhelming emotion entered my soul. Total relief.
but as you grew farther from me
it ate at my soul
not having you beside me
not being here to hold
I would dream of holding you so close to me i could feel ur heart beat on my chest
your hand touched mine it was the best.
My heart skips a beat when you r near
i long to hold you its killing me inside
its like a knif cutting thorugh
all i want to do is hold on to you
this ach in my heart it wont go away
its like it is here to stay forever
together and always will be just u an me an endless dream
i am lost in my world
a world my head made up
i cant get out of it until i have you near
close to me can u feel my fear?
its like i cant get out of it no matter how hard i try
its like a piece of me has slowly died.
pieces of me lost, as i cried
But i lived on, there are worse things
my soul had shone, now it stings.
Since the day i was left alone
sitting, solitude in my home.
until one day in the course of my life
when things got pretty close to the knife
he comes knocking at my door
just as i wished he had, that time i lay on the floor
We talked, we danced, we had a sing
when at the end of the night, he proposed a ring!
he looked into his eyes with mistory
he took the ring and smiled with glee
he held him close he knew inisde
this is the only thing that kept him alive
Since that day, we never left each others side
To those sacred vows we did abide
'Til death do us part
was all that mattered
To the end from the start
love notes strong yet always tattered
But remembering all the times i laughed and cried
i knew we'd live together forever,
'cause true love never dies.
you should do more than tree chapters.
esachasa chapter 2 . 2/1/2004
Contiue soon, Please?
Distant Soul chapter 2 . 1/30/2004
Awesome~! I luv your story! Keep up the good work! Update soon onegai?
Goddess-of-da-Cheeseburgers chapter 2 . 1/29/2004
*claps* o! i like! i like! author alert list, definetly!
Ookima chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
I'm totally hooked now lol
so now that Naruto's broken, I get that Kyubi is the one tht said all those bad things about Sasuke now
wonder what the fox is thinking
hope naruto comes back to his senses and get back control or something
anyway keep up the good work
you're doing great!
Japime Gurl chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
Aww. I can totally understand why Naruto is being mean. He got rejected. Harshly. (especially since Uchiha still has no idea)Ouch. This is really good (well written)though, loads of angst (and hopefully happy ending.) And I'm wondering what Naruto is going to pull, it should be interesting. He is Naruto after all.[Tease] Anyway can't wait for more [and I'm glad this is more than 3 chatpers!] Continue! _
Panda Doru The Geek God chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
AH! don't leave me like this! more more more!
Pinky-cat chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
YEAH! let the game begin! I knew you wouldn't make it too depri and let Naruto be... you know, 'broken'. I guess Naruto is Naruto after all _~. But isn't Sasuke in hospital, too? I mean Naruto can do the rasengan after all, but Sasuke learned chidori way sooner than Naruto the rasengan. So it could be possible that... Ok, ok I better not confuse you with my twittering _~ update soon!~
Misachu chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
*slight fangirlish squeal* Well written SasuNaru! T'is a miracle, I tell you! Anywho, very nice fic! Too bad Sasuke beat the crap out of Naruto, buy HEY, I'm sure the Uchiha boy had some bruises too _~ Just curious, how old are they in this? Please continue soon (and I'm glad it'll be more than three chapters!)
-Emsly
Watermelon Gal chapter 2 . 1/27/2004
O.O ack!
e! *smirks at sasuke*
thats wat u get wen u... *snickers*
oh and um gomen! the pic wont be done for a while i'll hopefully finish it before u finish "eyes" XD but school's back in one day *grumbles*
and im going to a picnic tomorrow *sighs*
oh well
update this soon k! *hugs!*
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