Reviews for Last Breath
LoveGohan chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
That's so beautiful
Rain chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Haunting. You have a unique perspective.
zfighter chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
that was a good poem. sad, but good. write another one soon!

Andross937 chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
wow... that was really good. Keep it up! See ya!
ShadowObscurity chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
*sniff* beautiful. Please continue, there is no way you can't. even though it might work out, please take a chance. Great work i love it.
thegreenpuma88 chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
This is was super! Of course, you have to continue! More chapters would be really good.
Son Chiako chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
Hey, this is pretty good! What am I saying? It's great! I think if you really feel you should continue it, then hell, I think you should too!