Reviews for The HomeGuard
Ancalagon chapter 8 . 3/15/2005
Another story, eh? Well, write it and I'll definatly read it! I'll even review every chapter again. Unless, of course, your so bloody tired of hearing from me that your sick, then I'll be quiet!
Ancalagon chapter 7 . 3/15/2005
Well, it's about time! Hehe! "Time for fu-"! Ha! Good thing he stopped her, eh? Where did you get the idea for the star-dust cats? I'm guessing the big bird is supposed to be a Phoenix, but the cats are neat!
Ancalagon chapter 6 . 3/15/2005
DAMN! Now thats a story! Why don't we get this kind of stuff in our history classes? Minmon is a silly bastard, isn't he? He forgot about the psyco lady!
Ancalagon chapter 5 . 3/15/2005
Hey, this kid might get to be something, huh? I frikin' HATE those skeletons. Bastards, popping up out of nowere! Go Mikhael! Smash the arse-holes!
Ancalagon chapter 4 . 3/15/2005
Ouch! Damn, she is bad ass, eh? I'm surprised that guy even had the nerve to open his mouth again!
Ancalagon chapter 3 . 3/15/2005
Hey! Tired of me yet? Ha, this is a fight I would like to see! Deamog was a bloody bastard, killed me six times before I got him! Ramn's pretty good with a bow, for a meele fighter! I suck with them, even with auto aim! These excamation points are annoying, aren't they? Oh well. See ya!
Ancalagon chapter 2 . 3/15/2005
Hello again! God, wartoks are stupid, aren't they? I think its funny to sneak up and get them in the back. They don't even notice I'm there until I hit them! I don't even need Invisibility potions! Anyway, still good! It's really funny! Keep it up!
ancalagon chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Hi! I like this! Crayla's funny! HA! She sounds like me when I play. Hehe! You know what I think? I think this story needs some more reviews, so I'm gonna review each chapter. You'll be sick of me soon!
Kendoka Girl chapter 3 . 10/24/2004
The battle scene is well scripted and nicely described. It really gives you a feel for the action.

aloha, Alice
Kendoka Girl chapter 2 . 10/20/2004
Again, very well done. The action scenes are gripping and nicely scripted. I can envision this as I read it.
Kendoka Girl chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
This is very nicely written and makes good use of background and action.

The characters are vivid and believable with effective dialogue.

I'm not familiar with the genre, but it's exciting.

Aloha, Alice
Jackie Almasy chapter 6 . 7/10/2004
O.O Holy crap this story is getting better and better as the chapters go on! Awesome chapter! Long, amazing, and absolutley satisfying if read all the way through patiently. Great job!
Jackie Almasy chapter 5 . 6/28/2004
VERY well written so far! I am really enjoying your characters, their progressing very nicely and smoothly into the story more. Your grammer use and spelling is excellent and I love how your story is just rolling out so nicely, making it very easy to understand and enjoy. I could definitley see this getting published upon its ending. Keep going!
Just Some Fellow chapter 5 . 6/16/2004
Just as good as the other chapters. Focusing on a new character now? I see why it's action adventure, heheh. Was chapter two a break in fighting? Or was it after they retired from the HomeGuard or some such? Can't wait for the next chapter to come out _.
Just Some Fellow chapter 4 . 6/16/2004
*eyes wide* Cool! I hope you'll do a chapter one their training, though most of this seems to be different periods in Crayla and Ramn's life. I love her response to the wise ass tall kid, it was hilarious. If this is just about their life, you should do a second one about the HomeGuard. This a great story, you seem to have put a lot of thought into it. Keep writing _
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