Reviews for The surprise ending
wtf chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
that was...well i don't know what it was exactly. i couldn't even read it to the ending that was supposedly beautiful. very rushed without much of a plot... and the details... :: shivers::

please consider serious revisions...
STACY chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
HOW CUTE. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON.
ChaosCrossbreed chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
I like it