Reviews for Lessons On an Incomplete Relationship
Another Anonymous Annoyance chapter 1 . 2/25
There's a first time for everything huh...
rebecca chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Yeah. It does work, in a kind of twisted way, doesn't it. Hah if this became canon most naruto fans would die of shock
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I liked this fic and they all are pretty laid back
CutieSOS chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
odd but i like it.
Maiden-of-the-Elements chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
That was a great one shot _
naash chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
wow i love how you twist their relationship. its wrong but its so right

naash
The Deterginator chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
THAT WAS AMAZING! It was funny and cute and I couldn't stop laughing!
ImCutePoison chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
That was dirty.. I like it. ]
Cupcake chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
completely badass , made me like Chouji more :D
L's Successor chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
wow .. intimate.
YukiNoSamurai chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Wow, you did suprisingly well on this. I was not expecting this much enjoyment from it. Usually threesomes will either center around smutt or a three-person relationship. The second requiring quite a bit more work. I love the way you portrayed their relationship and their personalities.

If Team 10 were to have a threesome I'd imagine it to be similar to this. Maybe not as odd...but similar. All of their nonchalant attitudes makes it odd, yet sweet and humorous. They just stopped caring about others comments or reactions, and they just seemed to belong. I have to admit...some parts were extremely odd, but it was very well written. I absolutely loved it. And Team 10 threesomes aren't even my favorite threesomes. Haha. But this has to be a favorite. I'm surprised you don't have even more reviews than you do. Over 5 years, this deserves a flood of good critics and kudos. Great job!

YukiNoSamurai
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Yay! Team 10 forever!

Really nicely done - not too in-depth, but getting into their heads without all the awful angsty stuff that seems to come along and spoil most good stories. Plus hot, but not totally indecent.

Call it 10/10 :D
havocmangawip chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Wandered over here because anat-astarte recc'd it and oh my gosh... I love this!

Very sweet threesome and brilliant use of the Sexy no Jutsu.

Everyone is so great. I love Shikamaru and Team 10.
childrenofeomund chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
oh my, that was. . . sweet, and hawt, and so many other things that can't be put into words. I thoroughly enjoyed that, it made my day
Shiruy chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Oh wow, this piece was absolutely amazing, utterly intrigueing and not quite like anything I've ever seen before. This goes definitely to my favourites. I love how their relationship just always... worked. And continues to do so. Very nice job you did here!
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