|Reviews for The Things Unsaid|
| rebecca chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Hmm. I can see that one.
| mabidiso chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
What an eye opener.
| littlelightbulb chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
wow. this was really nice. the connection at the end to writing stories was particularly powerful. as were certain lines, but too many for me to name them all. bravo. really.
| fiore777 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
I like that you have written this from Jiraiya's PoV, it is really nice seeing him reflect on the past, even if it is sad. Really liked how you talked about their first kiss.
| shadow-of-a-demon chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
I love it! It's so beautifully amazing! I really like the ending. OrochimaruxJiraiya is such an awsome pairing!
| nopenopnope chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
aw, this is so sweet, and yet so in character...which is nearly impossible to write, kudos!
| Coshaidamarsuntsu chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
That was kind of sad. It really got across the feeling that Jiraiya was just really tired.
| Sryn-chan chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
yayness! sadly morbid in a way but also very very pleasing. I loved it.
| Indecisive Mind chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
;.; Gyah...feel the angst. I love it!
| Konoko89 chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
Wow that's deep i really liked this fic .. *favs*
| yue no rei chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
haha what a strange ending
| Paper Fans chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
ABSOLUTELY SUMPTUOUS! FAV!
| Sandra chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
That had me speechless, it was wonderful, OroJira is an excellent pairing. Love that could never work, a relationship doomed to fall T_T
| boeboebi chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
YOU ARE AN AWESOME ONE-SHOT writer. i
| Dragon Pearl1 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Kya! I wouldn't call this sweet, but...
Very nicely written and I loved the part where Jiraiya was debating if he should tell Naruto about Sasuke or not.
I think everyone thinks that Jiraiya writes those books
because he's unsatisfactory with life. XD