Reviews for Still
Rosebud chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
I don't think it was weak at all. Aoshi just seems to be an icey character, which can make the passion a little low at times. But, here, the revenge, maybe even the regret, sorrow, and anger are all building in intensity, just waiting to surface. So, yes, you did a wonderful job at capturing his emotions at the time of their death. And I liked that you made him think of Misao;. He really will soon be consumed by his desire for revenge...making the real Aoshi disappear for awhile. So, kudos and I look forward to your next story!