Reviews for New Technology
anon chapter 23 . 4/11/2012
good story but what gets me is that you've completly left out the fact that sheen got stuck on a different planet and we still don't know if he was able to get back to Earth. And if he was able to get back what about the monkey?

source the tv show planet sheen
Amorekristall chapter 23 . 3/18/2012
This was absolutely beautiful!

Soo intense! Lol.

You have such an amazing way of writing,

you make us feel what the characters feel.

You should write your own books, seriously :)

keep up the awesome work!
Henry chapter 23 . 2/12/2012
The best work of art I have ever read! Do you have a follow up or a story that takes place after this one?
WinniUsagi chapter 23 . 11/12/2011
Aww this is kind of the opposite of "Our High School Reunion"! Very cute nonetheless.
alicefrombakugan chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Slightly mature but overall, very good. Keep writing JN.
Sorry I Just Did chapter 23 . 8/24/2011
Finally! Man, I thought I would lose all my brain cells with all the head banging I was doing.

I loved the story. Keep on writing great ones like it!
Sorry I Just Did chapter 21 . 8/24/2011
Dammit it Jimmy! Why did you have to pull a 'Max'? Why couldn't you just say you love her too? Grrrr

Oh I'm sure you're wondering what a 'Max' is, well everytime when a person admits that they like the other person and said person runs away I call it a 'Max' because in Maximu Ride (my favorite books) Max does the same thing.

Now back to reading the story! I must see what happens!
xavier chapter 17 . 7/30/2011
he loves cindy omg i couldnt tell
hollytiger chapter 4 . 5/18/2011
Om double g! its just like me when i am mad.
LostLyra chapter 23 . 3/15/2011
I'm a JN newbie, but I loved every part of this! Well done and I can't wait to read more of your stories! LL
xXxShiningDarknessxXx chapter 23 . 1/31/2011
I love this! It was amazing! Words can't be placed for it! It's that good! Keep up the good work! Oh, and loved the story plot and extra characters!
Pendar chapter 21 . 12/10/2010
I have to say...nice twist. Didn't see that coming.
Pendar chapter 11 . 12/10/2010
I really did laugh at Dan Brown's work being called "sophisticated" and the references to crazytown inhabitants who took his other books (like Angels and Demons) way too seriously.

Decent story, lad. It's rare for me to be reading a Jimmy Neutron fic for this long. My only issue is that your Jimmy isn't the "brain blast!", alien-fighting, wreck havocking Jimmy I know from the cartoon.

Keep up the good work, though, and never stop writing!
phantm29 chapter 23 . 11/3/2010
this story is the best !

i salute the author for having such a wonderful story . i was really impressed !
DiceRox09 chapter 23 . 10/14/2010
AWWW!

This was such a good story!

So dramatic, you never knew what to expect from Jimmy!

I loved it. :]

And I loved the concept of a little sister to soften him up, it was adorable.

The younger Neutron/Vortex love hate relationship had me cracking up!

I think there should be a story about that lol.

Anyways, fantastic job!

Write again soon! :]
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