Reviews for New Technology
Kassandra chapter 6 . 10/20/2015
Me: I fricken love this story...
Olivia: she's been saying this for 20 mins now shut up will you!
Kassandra chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
Me: dang...
Olivia: ...
Kassandra chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
Me:I love it already!
Olivia: me too!
Me: wow I thought you would make this face ;( I guessed not XP
Olivia: not gonna ask...
Calum-Thomas-Hood chapter 23 . 6/5/2015
(crying right now)This story is wonderful! (sniff) It touched my heart (sniff) I could'nt ask for more (sniff) This is too much (cries more) Too much that it reached my heart... You're the best! I LOVE YOU! And I LOVE THIS STORY ALSO! Thank you for this... I'm gonna go now and cry some more T-T... Thank you once again

- #1 Fan
nurdmobster chapter 23 . 4/16/2015
I loved it this is the best fan fic I've ever read except for a few spelling errors here and there but I have no room to talk...anyways I loved the story and I loved the ending I can't wait to read your other fanfics.
Guest chapter 23 . 10/22/2014
Overall a work of art, i never took my eyes off of it till it was finished, loved it.
iknowwhatimdoing chapter 23 . 7/23/2014
One sentence is enough for you...You AMAZING!
CartoonChaos chapter 23 . 5/24/2014
This was an amazing story... the passion, the drama, the brutality... it was all incredible... I'll definitely check out your other stories...
but first I feel the need to thank you for putting so much effort into this... this story was beautifully made and obviously had a lot of passion and emotion behind it... you should be very proud...

On a more fan-boyish and not critique note... Id like to say that not many people have been able to pull off Jimmy as a scary person or someone thats feared... and i would love it if there was more of that where he stands up for himself and is a general badass, but then this would be action and tragedy instead of romance... regardless you pulled it off nicely... great job...

george lamington chapter 9 . 5/8/2014
whats got into jimmys loving mind
HorsemanOTA chapter 23 . 1/15/2014
I would like to thank you for this read it was one hell of a story I loved reading every chapter. This one pulled on so many different emotions that were all over the place it was awesome. Excuse my language but I ducking loved this. And I look forward to your others works. Later Daze
JNeroH88 chapter 10 . 6/2/2013
I absolutely love this story stayed up till 1 getting to this point not wanting the only reason i did was cause i needed sleep otherwise id have probably read the entire thing you are truly a great writer
Falling-Pixie chapter 23 . 3/4/2013
This. This is one of THE best stories I have ever read on this website. It is so full of passion and anger and love and fear and I am enamored with it.

It did hit a little close to home for myself in some areas. I haven't had anything as bad as parents divorce or a relative, let alone sibling, be diagnosed with a fatal disease. However, especially at the end, the part Becca said about "You think too much, you concentrate too much on what's in here- rather than what's in here." Mind over emotion. That one really hit me hard. I am a person who bases everything on the mind. Every action I do I think about why I did/do it and what is going on mentally to make me do that. To me, everything is mentally based. And when Jimmy was thinking "Listen to your heart. If only it was that easy. How does someone go about doing that? How can someone "listen to their heart"?" I agreed fully with him. I had mostly been on Cindy and Becca's side but when he asked that question to himself, I was thrown in for a loop. I don't fully understand love at the moment. It may exist for others, because in their mind it is something that is real, but in my mind it just doesn't. It can't be real. Love is an emotion and emotions are unstable. It was quite difficult for me to read through personally, but I was very pleased with his outcome.

I would also like to point out that I usual hate characters the writer adds in, however Becca is one of the sweetest angels ever. She's one of those characters that you can't go against. Ever. So charismatic. I defiantly fell in love with her. Sarah's character was very infuriating and I loathed her with a passion. But it was almost a love hate relationship because she was magnificent in her destructive ways. I like that in, if you will, 'evil' characters. They're smart and have a good back story to them. Reasons for their actions. She was a devil of a women but I enjoyed her very much.

In any way, this was a magnificent read and I'm a little sad to see it end! I am defiantly going to go look at the Becca story you branched out with, if you've uploaded it that is. She is a wonderful character and I want to continue my reading in this wonderful world you've created.

Im not really one for out of character stories, and I feel like this one is to a degree (what with Jimmy's anger issues and Family issues) but you took it to another level of greatness. It's tricky when you deal with a fanfiction because you're dabbing into a world that has already been created and already has a fan base following. Even if this wasn't perfectly in character, as a story itself the characters were very well developed and interestingly fun to read. I had a wonderful time with this. Thank you for your creation. :D

Wow! What a doozy of a critique! I don't believe I have ever left one this long before. You deserve it. There are so many aspects about this that I love, and I could critique all day about each section in each chapter but quite frankly I am very tired and I think I've bothered you enough. haha
branden chapter 23 . 2/3/2013
this was a great story i havent been this stuck reading a story in a long time you should wright more
Fjdksk chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
Good story. I would have liked to see Rebecca die to beat things up
Ngerian boy chapter 13 . 10/16/2012
Dude ive been reading and its cul butt at the beginning you talk too much if you were agirl i will understand
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