|Reviews for Focus|
| deadlycute17 chapter 25 . 2/2
Omg please please please update! I love you!
| YayNayMayBay chapter 12 . 1/11
This story has such a great feel to it. Keep it up!
| Aro98 chapter 13 . 10/28/2014
I just realized...after five years of reading this over and over, Nanjiro is the only one to voice (aside from Fuji?) who thinks that Ryoma could be a top with Tezuka, and possibly a verse. Proof: "Just as he slipped out of the front gate, his dad sighed again and leaning back to lie on the porch, commented wistfully to no one in particular, 'At least he can't get knocked up.'" That is just awesome! XD
Also, please update. Again, I've been reading this for like five years, checking every day (literally!) in the hopes that it would update; emulating the remarkable you posted the 25th chapter and I was just a curious fanfiction newby.
| littlesnipper chapter 23 . 10/27/2014
I just wish you would start updating again, this story is very well written and I love the them together.
| So1Thought chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
| Reinamy's Cloud chapter 14 . 4/17/2014
There are no words to describe how utterly fantastic this story is. Awesome characterization, lovely pacing, and despite the occasional SPaG error/typo, very well-written all around. And don't even get me started on Tezuka and Ryoma's relationship! It was a delight to watch it develop and grow.
Also, major kudos for making me laugh so much. I learned very quickly early on in the fic that liquid substances and this story do not go well together. I swear you had me in stitches for, like, three chapters straight. I was literally howling with laughter. Gosh.
The story hasn't been updated in years (and considering when it last was, isn't likely to) but I wanted to thank you for writing it anyway. I'm choosing to leave this review now because I have a feeling that when I get to the last chapter I'll probably be so disappointed (though no less grateful that you still kept it up!) that any comment from me would be weepy at best.
I hope everything is okay on your end (IRL, I mean), and best of luck to you.
WAIT! Before I go, let me thank you from the very bottom of my heart for not falling into the stereotypical seme/uke bullcrap. I was thrilled-THRILLED-when I realized that they actually switched! I swear, author, I would hug you to death if I could. Whoever came up with the idea that only one person could top or bottom in a homosexual relationship (and those roles should be based on physical appearance, no less!) should be tossed off a pyramid. The seme/uke dynamic, especially in its extreme, grates on my nerves (hence why I don't read much yaoi manga or venture into anime/manga yaoi fandoms anymore). So seriously, thank you for that, and if anyone ever gave you crap for it then I hope you disregarded them for being small-minded and unimaginative.
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/9/2014
can't stop laughing!
| Q3APo chapter 25 . 1/29/2014
actually i prefer tezuka as top but your story is very good that make it unimportant details. i really cant wait for the next chapter
| Rotten-Ivy chapter 25 . 1/21/2014
and i still have a faith that you would somehow remember this and finish this story.
gonna wait you for forever
| Yulisa chapter 25 . 1/11/2014
Update update update...please?
*makes puppy eyes*
Unless you've disappeared off the face of the earth or something...
Ugggggh you HAVE to update!
| duchessme chapter 25 . 7/17/2013
| ShadowTacticianVI chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
As i expected, I do love your story :). You've written them very cute together and I'm definitely excited to see their relationship progress into the nationals section of the plot! :DDD They're just way too cute together... I love how you write them, and of course, you write the lemons really well too ;) haha! I hope you update soon! This is definitely a story I'd love to see completed, after all the work that has been put into it!
| ShadowTacticianVI chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
'oh no, I meant to reach for the pen but somehow, my hand ended up in your lap. But that's okay, right? Cuz we're such close friends now.'
| ShadowTacticianVI chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
I don't know if you intended it to be, but Ryoma is very funny.
...snicker, hahah, :)
| ShadowTacticianVI chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Hi, I just got into the fandom PoT via crossovers (should really get to watching the real thing some time...) and now I'm really into it! Ahaha, I saw your story using the new search filters and whatnot, and NOW I"M READING IT. :) I really hope you update it at some point! Haha I actually haven't read it yet, and I don't usually review, but I just wanted to let you know that there are people still reading it ;). I'll definitely review again if I get to the end of this 180,000 word wip, (and I usually do), I'm just excited because i do like Tezuka and Ryoma and it looks like tons of other people liked your story too!
Good luck with everything that's occupying your time in real life, and I hope you find some inspiration for this story again!