|Reviews for What He Cannot Hide From|
| nothing but blue chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
aw, cute. i liked the whole unicorn thing. very interesting and original! great job! :D
| SiLvErMoOnWiNg chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
the beginning was kind of confusing, but the end cleared up all of it. anyways this is a great story. i think that you should write a sequel to this story.
| Midnight's Falling Star chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
I read this and I just thought...wow. That was SO good! There really should be at least another chapter to this story. But this was great! Wonderful Work!
| Morrighan of Crimson and Sable chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Aww...! I love how you put this together! Excellent!
| Sabersonic chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Pretty interesting idea for a story, do you think that there could be a continuation of this story?
| Hououza chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
After reading this is was speechless...then I remembered that I'm typing this...
That was absolutely beautiful, thw descriptions were vibrant and full of life. I already loke this a lot having read only this first chapter. I look forwards to having the chance to read more!
Good luck & best wishes,
| DeannaAngel chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
it's very good and ..Interesting