Reviews for Two Brothers
Bitty Lime Candies chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
Wow, this story is going to have a lot of potential! I think that you should put some sort of symbol to separate scenes, however; it confused me for a moment when the scene near the end changed from Dan to Bobby.

All and all, this was a very interesting and well writen chapter. I hope you decide to continue this soon!
SyberiaWinx chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
I have always liked this story, but realized just now that I have ever reviewed it. This is a great fic, and I really hope you do decide to continue it after all this time.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Mwahahaha its brillant
Rogue Kyne chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Hey.. nice fic.. I think I might like it so far...