Reviews for Desperate
Account-Is-No-Longer-Active chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
another good one.
LovelyAphrodite chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
you are great keep it up

write on different subjects you might get more reviews
insertpenamehere chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
6 out of 10. Not bad. But not good either.
insanemaniacwhohasnothingbettertodo chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
good, but... WHO IS SHE TALKING ABOUT? i think i can be pretty sure the one thinking/talking is Terra, but who is she talking about? or is it just missing and "r" after "You" in the third line from the bottom? bah, i like it anyway!
ummm chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
Awesome. You got a gift!
SADS chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Is Terra saying this?
Raven A. Star chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
dude, that waas good! _ Love your poems.