|Reviews for On the Brink|
| NorthernShinigami chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
First time I hear about the sakura-blood idea was in Tokyo Babylon Manga (Or X manga. Or clamp, pic either xD)
I say... they once knew each other as small children and kai forgot, or only Rei knew him, and was like a creepy Stalker child! And then he grew, and died, and... I know, brutelly murderd! And was left with the obssession for Kai to fill his empty heart :3
| yukikittycatofwisdom chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
this is so awesome nya
| darkdranzer chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
| tntiggris chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
I have no clue how u came up with this but I like it .
| Misura chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
My first thought at the ending is that Kai died. o.O Maybe I'm just in a bit of a morbid mood or something. Sorry. I loved the haunting mood of this fic, the way you created an atmosphere of mystery and dreams and kept it up until the very last word. I enjoyed reading this a lot.
| Renn chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
| SoulSister chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
wow... I seem to be reading the oddest fics lately and loving them too. I'm impressed by this. I love the style you wrote this in, the plot was very intriguing. slight OOCness but he was going a bit crazy so it made sense. great work here .
| Badger Off chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
That was crazy, but very good! I liked the plot... It's was cool! Kai/Rei rules!
| Shaka Dragomir Nocturnus chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
It doesn't matter if Kai said the truth or he was just seeing things, he felt loved and that matters, I almost forgot, great story
| mizuumi hakuya chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Well, that was interesting...haven't seen something quite like this. He just wants to be loved! o.0; Right...no more late night reviews...after this...
The tree spirit thing might be more believable if Kai wasn't in a white padded room and seemed more like a schizo...
Kai does seem a little out of character but I guess if you're turning into a jumpy freak who sees people...
Nice writing. I'm not usually a fan of this style or first person but you did a pretty good job on it.
I think it could have been a bit longer, maybe go a bit deeper into it. That classroom scene in particular could have been expanded on. Somehow I didn't get much emotion out of all of it. I didn't feel what Kai was feeling, confused, abandoned by his parents...
Well, just something to work on. Other than that good work!
I'm gonna stop now cuz i felt like reviewing this for some strange reason and I'm starting to sound like my english teacher...oi...
| Sarcasmcat chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Magnificent. Amazing. I love it.
| pandarot chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Hello~! * waves * _~
Weird? No! It’s not that weird at all! Somehow, this story makes me laugh! * laughs * I dunno why, maybe it’s because Kai’s having a dilemma and well, what should I say? I like reading about ‘losing-sanity’ type of fics! 0_o * brings corn3ts in a mental institute * But that doesn’t mean I’m ‘that’ kind of people... well, maybe.
But lets just blame it to my Yaoi obsessions. P * smirks *
Anyway... you’re inspired to write K/R again because of ‘Fitting In’? * shock * I never thought you’ll do! _~ You know, I’m experiencing the same as you, but then again, when I saw your ‘Come Undone’ ( * hinthint * ) and this fic, ‘On the Brink’ and read them... I became inspired again! _
And about ‘In the End’, I think, both Kai and Rei are fair now in terms of... mental illness. P But yours is better! _ As far as I remember, when I was around four yrs. old and went to Japan with my Dad and Mom, I heard of the similar story as yours, ( i.e A Sakura tree spirit who baits people and all... ) together with the Yuki-onna tale ;;. But then again, as Kai said, it’s only an Urban Legend ( Like Chobits? * giggles * ) and just made by people in the olden days...
Okay, I’m already ranting now, so I’ll just stop here ;;. After all, the review is getting lengthy now. _
Ja ne and good luck! Love ya! * huggles Scarlet M. Y *
BTW, I laughed when I read that ‘Takao and Max screwing part’ XP. Hehehe, something that can annoy Kai very much, ne? _~
| Devlinn Reiko chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Totally pyscological! Mind-bending! It was totally awesome! Great fic!