Reviews for Goodbye, My Soul
Rurri chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
I think the lyrics fitted the story well, it was great.
Margouxbriar chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Oh my gosh! You're story is so sad. It beats sad, its depressing. But its so good! I almost cried. Keep up the good work.
Banana-boo chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Oh my gosh! He DIED? That's so sad! I cried while I read this... Poor Jim... it's so sad!

And Silver...he...DIED? He's one of my favorite characters! AND HE DIED?

*bursts into tears*

Not Silver! no! NO!

But you are a very good writer! And you said you had WRITERS BLOCK while you wrote this? DUDE! How do you write that good with writers block? You're amazing!

I agree with Night Music! You should write a sequel about him excaping or something!


samus18 chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Gosh, I don't blame the poor guy for being so upset.
katy chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
wow. thats so sad! it was great though. _ you are a good writer, honestly!
NNCS chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
omg...that was so sad...but so good at the same time!
Syndromia chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
I like it. It's very, sad. Your a good author.
Lone Wolfdog chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
Aw. Poor Jimbo... This story made me cry but it was very good. I like it.
Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
Very good, but I think it's kinda upsetting how Jim reacts when he thinks Silver's dead. Jim and Silver are my favorite people in Treasure Planet.
ArcherofDarkness and Callie chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
Do you like killing off all of our favorite characters Raine? Poor Silver...
jaguar-kally7 chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
This is sad, but incredible. Wish I could "burn off writer's block" like that.
angel chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
I sugest you go into hiding somewhere in Yugoslavia, Night Music is gonna kil you...
Very touching. I still can't believe you killed Silver. You are so dead as soon as Night Music sees this author alert...*clicks tongue*
Dead, dead, dead...
angelface04 chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
at first when i was reading it, and i saw hilary duff's lyrics, i was like "oh my gosh rhaine, i thought that you had more sense then that." not that i have anything against hilary, it's just when i look at her in relation to treasure planet, it's know what i mean?
but i just told myself that i was just going to read it, and i did, and it turned out to be one of the best short stories i have ever read. you have so much talent and you're using it so well, and that's amazing.
and hilary's lyrics fit the mood so perfectly. you picked just the right spots to use them, making it sound much more deep than the song really is.
*puts on author alert list, favorite stories list, and favorite authors list*
awesome job! sorry if this is really long and drawn out, i'll let you go now!
Night Music chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
::...stunned silence...::
This was...wonderful! I mean, okay, so I'm really distraught that you killed off my favorite character in the whole wide world but...Jim's reaction to his death was so perfect. And the title to this piece fit it so well...
Oh man...I still can't believe this story! It was so great! But you know what would be awesome...? If you continued it! I mean, it didn't say anywhere in the paper that Silver *had been* executed. It just said that he was tried and was *going to be* executed. So he could still escape! He's still alive! He and Jim could have a beautiful reunion!
::dances at the possibilities::
::goes back into serious mode:: All the same...this was a beautiful piece and I thank you ever so much for writing it. Please do e-mail me and tell me if you plan on continuing it. Hah, because if you're not I may have to ask for your permission to write a short one-piece sequel to it. :-)